I re-edit the book and now it flows better and added a little more and some more humor and changes up the order of the words tell me what you think about the change please ? Thank you
agh I am so lazy and AT LEAST MY COMPUTER IS WORKING AGAIN YAY (moral of the story: do NOT have at least three months worth of browsing history on your computer combined with weird add-ons, says my dad, and a Trojan horse that Norton refuses to find and remove. It's still there I think but HEY THE COMPUTER WORKS)