Into_The_Saberverse

Saw a review on Space Battles about my fic when the first chapters dropped. Gotta say "Walking a Thin Line" does not inspire confidence in me as a writer "And hasn't done anything god awful yet but we'll see" does not either, but learn and move on I suppose XD.

FireFlash_Sonic1122

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@Into_The_Saberverse You should ne proud. I've only just finished part 1 but it was good. Way better than anything "professionals" do these days.
          	  
          	  Peter was on point, a bit MCU feeling but hey, he ain't Peter Dorker for no reason, a nerd with a hero complex the size of the moon? Perfection.
          	  
          	  Saber is as awesome as always, a soldier essentially just discovering her discarded emotions again, falling in love, finally being selfish for once? Chef's Kiss.
          	  
          	  Rin, I don't think I've seen a truer depiction, other than abridged, yet, the team offer was a bit sudden true, but honestly? Definitely something she'd do.
          	  
          	  Rouge, I'm gonna be frank with you I'd never even heard of her backstory but personally you executed it to nigh perfection. From her and Heracles' introduction to Kirei's involvement... Stop making me blush so bloody much dangit, this is some high quality shit!
          	  
          	  Johnny is bloody Johnny, and I'll admit I don't remember much of MJ because Paul is... So much of a dissapointment. Seriously, Marvel? Could have been a bit more subtle.
          	  
          	  But anyway, they were good, as I said Johnny is Johnny you can't really go wrong there unless you're Marvel, and MJ feels so much like Spectacular it hurts. Given what I remember of it anyway. I should rewatch that.
          	  
          	  Whatever, point is, you do good work. Be proud, we'll follow you the whole way.
          	  
          	  I mean you introduced me Toaru for God's sake and I'm still riding that train! You think I'm just gonna forget that?
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TrueBlue0777

@Into_The_Saberverse their review doesn’t seem so bad. Although I’ll admit that those certain choice of words definitely wouldn’t inspire confidence. Also they seemed to mostly be talking about the first chapter.
          	  
          	  But another reviewer from later seemed to understand that you were foreshadowing events for later when name dropping certain characters. Helps that they finished the first part before making a review.
          	  
          	  Also get the slight impression that they’re not 100% in depth in Marvel lore as they are with Fate. One questioned why Spider-Man would have Bullet Time and another believed this to be Film centered.
          	  
          	  Another believed Doom wouldn’t bother having anything to do with the Holy Grail. Even though stealing Magic Powers and Artifacts of Power is basically Doom’s MO.
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Sabrina_The_Tigar

@Into_The_Saberverse I guess we rushed our judgement too quickly. However, when you said their feedback doesn’t inspired confidence for you as a writer, I thought that they didn’t give you a constructive criticism before you informed us with more information. So, I’m sorry for making a quick judgement, but I’m glad that you’re doing well.
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Ghostwolf2022

Jaune watching the fight between Logan and Wade from outside the Honda Odyssey:
          
          Jaune: “Tell me when you’re both done so I can start driving again!”
          
          Deadpool: “No problem Goldilocks!”
          
          Gets his arm broken by Logan.
          
          Deadpool: “Gah, you dirty bitch!”
          
          Jaune checks her phone to see if there’s any service and thankfully she has a full five bars.
          
          Jaune: “Well now’s as good as any time to catch up on One Piece.  Wonder what Luffy and crew have been up to since sabaody.”
          
          For the next several hours Jaune watches One Piece on her phone while Logan and Wade stab each other in the Honda Odyssey. 
          
          Jaune: “Ya know after all the punishment that thing has taken I take back every negative thing I’ve said about the Honda Odyssey.”

JulianSummers777

If Rouge absorbed Tamamo's powers and gain her fox ears and tail, would Rouge involuntarily start saying mikon?

JulianSummers777

@Ghostwolf2022 who to say it isn't both? Maybe she can't help but say mikon, but she doesn't mind because she likes to say it anyway.
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Ghostwolf2022

@JulianSummers777 so implying that Tamamo literally can’t help herself from saying mikon.
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Ghostwolf2022

Jaune in Deadpool and Wolverine:
          
          Deadpool is busy digging up Logan’s corpse while Jaune keeps watch.
          
          Jaune: “Wade I know you’re trying to save our universe and all but everything about this just feels wrong.”
          
          Deadpool: “Jaune, do you want our universe to get done like Old Yeller?”
          
          Jaune: “Well obviously not.”
          
          Deadpool: “Then either grab a shovel or keep a lookout.”
          
          Jaune: “Look, it’s just wrong to desecrate a corpse especially one of a hero like Logan!”
          
          Deadpool: “Tell that to Disney or the writers at marvel.  I just have the balls to actually look at the corpse while I’m digging it up.  Disney’s gonna make Hugh Jackman do this till he’s ninety!”
          
          Jaune: “I still have no idea what you’re talking about.”
          
          Deadpool: “Found him!”
          
          Deadpool throws Logan’s rotted corpse out of the grave prompting Jaune to throw up.
          
          Jaune: “Dear god this is so wrong!”
          
          Deadpool: “Okay now all we need is 200 million dollars and a necromancer and we’re good to go!”

Ghostwolf2022

@JulianSummers777 
            
            Deadpool: “Well we’re about to have company and according to science there’s 206 bones in the human body.  207 if I’m watching Gossip Girl.  And this is one sharp chrome job.”
            
            Jaune: “Wade no…we’ve already desecrated his corpse let’s just find a replacement.”
            
            Deadpool: “Fair point maybe this next one won’t be embarrassed about wearing a costume like he’s in a superhero movie.”
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JulianSummers777

@Ghostwolf2022 
            
            Deadpool: "That was weird, I am much calmer now."
            
            Jaune: "What... was even... the point of all this?! "
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Ghostwolf2022

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Mordred dresses up for Halloween:
          
          Miles: “So Mordy who are you dressing up as this Halloween?”
          
          Mordred: “Oh that’s a surprise.”
          
          Later on Halloween night Miles is dressed up as Zombie Michael Jackson waiting for Mordred to finish getting dressed.
          
          Miles: “Come on we’re gonna be late for the party at Visions.”
          
          Mordred: “Almost done just need to fix this strap and…there.”
          
          Mordred comes out of her room dressed up as Ryuko Matoi from Kill La Kill much to Miles’ shock and embarrassment.
          
          Mordred: “Well…like what you see~?”
          
          Miles: “Mordred you do realize there’s still a dress code for the Halloween party right!?”
          
          Mordred: “Relax.  Jericho hooked me up with some of his voodoo magic this thing can transform into a sailor outfit no problem.”
          
          Mordred’s costume then does just that changing from its overly revealing form to a somewhat more modest sailor outfit.
          
          Miles: “Oh thank god…for a second there I thought you were gonna show that off at school.”
          
          Mordred: “Well how else am I gonna win the costume contest.”
          
          Miles: “You…are so getting expelled or disqualified.”

Ghostwolf2022

Mordred plays Sparking Zero:
          
          Mordred: “Great Ape Vegeta?  This is the fight everyone is afraid of.  We’ll see about that.”
          
          2 hours and three spare TVs later.
          
          Mordred: “Starting to understand why Freiza wanted to exterminate you all!”
          
          Miles: “Let me try.”
          
          Easily beats Great Ape Vegeta.
          
          Mordred: “How!?”
          
          Miles: “Skill issue.”

JulianSummers777

@Zer0-Origin I mean, he's not completely wrong.
            
            https://youtu.be/THqRYyIZAWQ?si=2kZ60lRvcO7PYJ55
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Zer0-Origin

@Ghostwolf2022 
            Spider-Man 2099: "This was a canon event Mordred. Your fate is to be always terrible at games."
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JulianSummers777

A couple Rouges like a prayer.
          
          Rouge: "I never asked to be a mutant, I just want to end the hatred against mutants. For both humans and mutants to be seen as equals, I thought that meant riding the world of mutants by turning into humans. That has been my wish, and I would have done anything to have it granted, even if meant becoming a villain."
          
          X-men Rouge: "I get where your coming from, I really do. I used to be a lot like you, but then I met Charles Xavier. He taught me how to use my powers for good, and he gave me a home and family who love and accept me for who I am. And now in my world, Rouge is the name of a hero. You don't wanna be a mutant anymore? Then fine... that's your choice. But me? I am proud to be a mutant, and I am proud to wear this uniform... it means I'm apart of something bigger then myself. It means I'm an x-man... I am one of THE x-men."