Into_The_Saberverse

Saw a review on Space Battles about my fic when the first chapters dropped. Gotta say "Walking a Thin Line" does not inspire confidence in me as a writer "And hasn't done anything god awful yet but we'll see" does not either, but learn and move on I suppose XD.

FireFlash_Sonic1122

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@Into_The_Saberverse You should ne proud. I've only just finished part 1 but it was good. Way better than anything "professionals" do these days.
          	  
          	  Peter was on point, a bit MCU feeling but hey, he ain't Peter Dorker for no reason, a nerd with a hero complex the size of the moon? Perfection.
          	  
          	  Saber is as awesome as always, a soldier essentially just discovering her discarded emotions again, falling in love, finally being selfish for once? Chef's Kiss.
          	  
          	  Rin, I don't think I've seen a truer depiction, other than abridged, yet, the team offer was a bit sudden true, but honestly? Definitely something she'd do.
          	  
          	  Rouge, I'm gonna be frank with you I'd never even heard of her backstory but personally you executed it to nigh perfection. From her and Heracles' introduction to Kirei's involvement... Stop making me blush so bloody much dangit, this is some high quality shit!
          	  
          	  Johnny is bloody Johnny, and I'll admit I don't remember much of MJ because Paul is... So much of a dissapointment. Seriously, Marvel? Could have been a bit more subtle.
          	  
          	  But anyway, they were good, as I said Johnny is Johnny you can't really go wrong there unless you're Marvel, and MJ feels so much like Spectacular it hurts. Given what I remember of it anyway. I should rewatch that.
          	  
          	  Whatever, point is, you do good work. Be proud, we'll follow you the whole way.
          	  
          	  I mean you introduced me Toaru for God's sake and I'm still riding that train! You think I'm just gonna forget that?
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TrueBlue0777

@Into_The_Saberverse their review doesn’t seem so bad. Although I’ll admit that those certain choice of words definitely wouldn’t inspire confidence. Also they seemed to mostly be talking about the first chapter.
          	  
          	  But another reviewer from later seemed to understand that you were foreshadowing events for later when name dropping certain characters. Helps that they finished the first part before making a review.
          	  
          	  Also get the slight impression that they’re not 100% in depth in Marvel lore as they are with Fate. One questioned why Spider-Man would have Bullet Time and another believed this to be Film centered.
          	  
          	  Another believed Doom wouldn’t bother having anything to do with the Holy Grail. Even though stealing Magic Powers and Artifacts of Power is basically Doom’s MO.
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Sabrina_The_Tigar

@Into_The_Saberverse I guess we rushed our judgement too quickly. However, when you said their feedback doesn’t inspired confidence for you as a writer, I thought that they didn’t give you a constructive criticism before you informed us with more information. So, I’m sorry for making a quick judgement, but I’m glad that you’re doing well.
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Ghostwolf2022

https://youtube.com/shorts/EWSdyzN0gt8?si=cXJPZ5xg__9vxxXt
          
          Peter: “Saber, we need to move to Canada!”
          
          Saber: “What, why?”
          
          Peter: “I’ve been doxxed Arty, Jonah has everything!”
          
          Saber: “Please, like anyone will believe what that hack has to say.”
          
          Peter: “Saber, the Discord chat got leaked.”
          
          Saber suddenly turns into Saber Alter.
          
          Saber Alter: “We must destroy the city!”

Zer0-Origin

So, recently the Death Battle of Cell vs Metal Sonic was out, along side Fate Strange Fake episode of Gilgamesh facing Huawa. While I enjoy both of them, it got me thinking of a battle between Neo Metal Sonic vs Gilgamesh. So here my version of this matchup. 
          
          *Neo Metal Sonic was send flying down across the now burning battle airship. Gilgamesh appears before him, walking through the flames.*
          
          Gilgamesh: "Fool. You're dealing with the King of Heros."
          
          Neo Metal Sonic: "I already possess data of heros, far beyond your level. Observe."
          
          *Neo Metal Sonic holds out a red Chaos Emerald.*
          
          Neo Metal Sonic: "Chaos Control!"
          
          *Neo Metal Sonic stop time. He then uses his optic scanners on the King of Heros.*
          
          Neo Metal Sonic: "Lifeform data successfully copied."
          
          *Neo Metal Sonic unfroze time, and spin dash at Gilgamesh, sending him flying. Gilgamesh recover, and open his Gate of Babylon to fire off his weapons at Neo Metal Sonic. While Neo Metal Sonic use light hard holograms to make his newly copy Gate of Babylon. Both side's weapons fire off against each other. Gilgamesh looks around the chaos as he saw Neo Metal Sonic, hight in the air, preparing to use Ishtar's Noble Phantasm. Gilgamesh looks annoyed as he is reminded of the useless goddess he hate the most.*
          
          Gilgamesh: "Don't you dare."
          
          *Neo Metal Sonic dare. He fire off the Noble Phantom. Gilgamesh try to power through the blast, but was send flying down as he screamed.*

Zer0-Origin

*Gilgamesh was send flying down to Fuyuki City. Now recreating the fire incident at the end of the 4th Holy Grail War. However unlike last time, Gilgamesh was on the ground, humiliated, and filled with rage. Neo Metal Sonic appears before him. Gilgamesh summoned Enuma Elish, while Neo Metal Sonic summoned his own version of his. Both weapons charge up, and fire at at other.*
            
            Gilgamesh: "I'm not just the greatest King that ever live! I stand beyond all of life!"
            
            *Gilgamesh scream as he overpowered Neo Metal Sonic. Gilgamesh laugh with triumph. However Neo Metal Sonic use Chaos Control at the last moment, and use Enkidu chains to stab Gilgamesh all over his body, trapping him, in great pain. Time unfroze as Gilgamesh yells out in pain.*
            
            Neo Metal Sonic: "If that true, then I have overthrown all of you, Heroic spirit."
            
            Gilgamesh: "I won't lose, to a machine like-"
            
            *However Gilgamesh never got to finish his sentence as Neo Metal Sonic fire off his Enuma Elish again, completely vaporize Gilgamesh, who screams in terror as he gets engulfed by the attack as it reaches into outer space. Leaving bits of his spirit left. However Neo Metal Sonic use Silver's telekinesis to grab them and crush them. Leaving no trace of Gilgamesh left. Completely destroying him.*
            
            Neo Metal Sonic: "I'll crush you!"
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Ghostwolf2022

Something I think we should absolutely see is Hulk and Bruce Banner getting separated if only because it led to a really good scene where Hulk reveals his origin as a coping mechanism for Bruce to deal with the trauma of his abusive father.

Ghostwolf2022

Here’s an interesting idea, does Thor’s daughter Thrud actually look like Saber?  Because if she does that would actually be pretty funny considering it would mean if Arty was to wield Mjolnir and go to Asgard everyone except Heimdall and Odin would just assume she’s Thrud.

Ghostwolf2022

So here’s a question if you were to create a completely original variant of Arturia for the Ultimate universe what would change about her and what are some cool design ideas you have?

Tomme_tale

@Ghostwolf2022 que en vez de criarse con sir ector, lo haga como el Arturo de la película del Rey Arturo y la leyenda de la espada, esa peli que cambia detalles del mito.
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Zer0-Origin

If Deadpool, and Jeanne D'arc meet Darth Vader (Star Wars). 
          
          Jeanne D'arc: "I know you have a heart. What do you feel?... Was it worth it?"
          
          Darth Vader: "This is only a distraction. Anakin Slywalker no longer exists."
          
          Jeanne D'arc: "Pain is being Human."
          
          Darth Vader: "Through pain, I gain strength. Your allies abandoned you. You are alone. No salvation awaits you." 
          
          Deadpool: "Well then, get your game on!"
          
          *Deadpool summon a Duel disk, and Yu-Gi-Oh cards.*
          
          Deadpool: "Oops. I wrong weapon."

JulianSummers777

https://youtu.be/uyu8HN0TlyE?si=232JtuN5zNyMp1wk
          
          Fate: totem version of doctor Doom's wedding.
          
          The Bride: "I have been intimate... with Johnny Storm..."
          
          Doom just stands there in slight fury while both Namor and Gilgamesh burst out laughing.
          
          Namor: "HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!"
          
          Gil: "FUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA!!!" 
          
          The two kings lean on each other for support as they continue to laugh and point at Doom's misfortune like a couple of hyenas. 
          
          Reed: "JOHNNY!!!"
          
          Peter: "WHAT THE ACTUAL HELL, BRO?!!!"
          
          The thing: "Oh..."
          
          Sue: "Brother..."
          
          Reed stretchs his arm to smack Johhny upside the head. Meanwhile, Arturia points Excalibur at Morgan Le Fay.
          
          Arturia: "Is this your magic at work, Morgan?!"
          
          Morgan: "Actually, no. I had nothing to do with this. That little fire bug was stupid enough to not know when to keep it in his pants. I'm getting my Apprentice back, and I didn't have to do a thing to do so."
          
          Then Arturia truns towards Johnny and grabs him by his shirt caller and yells right at his face.
          
          Arturia: "WHAT THE F@CK IS WRONG WITH YOU?!!!"
          
          Finally Doom lets out a huge explosion of magic energy in horrid anger.
          
          Doom: "VILE BETRAYERS!!! THIS TREACHERY CANNOT BE COUNTENANCED!!! FACE NOW THE FULL UNBRIDLED WRATH OF DOOM!!!"