Into_The_Saberverse

Saw a review on Space Battles about my fic when the first chapters dropped. Gotta say "Walking a Thin Line" does not inspire confidence in me as a writer "And hasn't done anything god awful yet but we'll see" does not either, but learn and move on I suppose XD.

FireFlash_Sonic1122

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@Into_The_Saberverse You should ne proud. I've only just finished part 1 but it was good. Way better than anything "professionals" do these days.
          	  
          	  Peter was on point, a bit MCU feeling but hey, he ain't Peter Dorker for no reason, a nerd with a hero complex the size of the moon? Perfection.
          	  
          	  Saber is as awesome as always, a soldier essentially just discovering her discarded emotions again, falling in love, finally being selfish for once? Chef's Kiss.
          	  
          	  Rin, I don't think I've seen a truer depiction, other than abridged, yet, the team offer was a bit sudden true, but honestly? Definitely something she'd do.
          	  
          	  Rouge, I'm gonna be frank with you I'd never even heard of her backstory but personally you executed it to nigh perfection. From her and Heracles' introduction to Kirei's involvement... Stop making me blush so bloody much dangit, this is some high quality shit!
          	  
          	  Johnny is bloody Johnny, and I'll admit I don't remember much of MJ because Paul is... So much of a dissapointment. Seriously, Marvel? Could have been a bit more subtle.
          	  
          	  But anyway, they were good, as I said Johnny is Johnny you can't really go wrong there unless you're Marvel, and MJ feels so much like Spectacular it hurts. Given what I remember of it anyway. I should rewatch that.
          	  
          	  Whatever, point is, you do good work. Be proud, we'll follow you the whole way.
          	  
          	  I mean you introduced me Toaru for God's sake and I'm still riding that train! You think I'm just gonna forget that?
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TrueBlue0777

@Into_The_Saberverse their review doesn’t seem so bad. Although I’ll admit that those certain choice of words definitely wouldn’t inspire confidence. Also they seemed to mostly be talking about the first chapter.
          	  
          	  But another reviewer from later seemed to understand that you were foreshadowing events for later when name dropping certain characters. Helps that they finished the first part before making a review.
          	  
          	  Also get the slight impression that they’re not 100% in depth in Marvel lore as they are with Fate. One questioned why Spider-Man would have Bullet Time and another believed this to be Film centered.
          	  
          	  Another believed Doom wouldn’t bother having anything to do with the Holy Grail. Even though stealing Magic Powers and Artifacts of Power is basically Doom’s MO.
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Sabrina_The_Tigar

@Into_The_Saberverse I guess we rushed our judgement too quickly. However, when you said their feedback doesn’t inspired confidence for you as a writer, I thought that they didn’t give you a constructive criticism before you informed us with more information. So, I’m sorry for making a quick judgement, but I’m glad that you’re doing well.
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Zer0-Origin

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          Deadpool look over to see Jeanne, and Jalter. They all went to Disneyland earlier, and while they had a fun time, Jeanne was sad due to Disney became a hollow version of themselves, and Jalter was mad at the greedy people who are running it. Since Deadpool can't deal with the greedy people the usually way, due to knowing how Jeanne would react, he have a different idea to solve this problem. 
          
          Deadpool: "Oh. Plan to gather people to visit a certain someone." 
          
          Disney villains confront Disney CEO music video.
          
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Ghostwolf2022

So here’s a thought say Arturia and Peter have a kid together and they end up having Spider powers.  A few days later Charles Xavier shows up on their doorstep trying to convince them to bring their kid to Krakoa.
          
          Peter: “Professor you’re great and all but Mayday needs to be with her own kind.”
          
          Charles: “That’s exactly what I’m saying.”
          
          Peter: “This has nothing to do with her being a Mutant or not.  I’m saying she deserves to grow up here with her family.”
          
          Charles: “But she’ll grow up around kids just like her on Krakoa.”
          
          Arturia: “Yeah, but she’ll also do the same here.  You seem to forget we’re close with the Fantastic Four.”
          
          Charles: “But what if-.”
          
          Peter: “Professor I love ya and you’re a great educator but we’re not moving away from everything.  Most we’ll do is consider enrolling her in your school if for whatever reason Mayday won’t be able to attend the Future Foundation.”

Zer0-Origin

@Ghostwolf2022 
            Arturia: "And your facilities keep getting blown up."
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Ghostwolf2022

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So I know that when it comes Power scaling servants beat out most of Marvel however I do think Marvel’s higher tier characters are on par if not greater than Fate.  Namely Galactus (Credit where it’s due Excalibur could potentially take him out) most servants would have a hard time keeping up with his heralds much less fighting Galactus himself.  I’m pretty sure even Gilgamesh would shit himself if he heard “Galactus is coming”.  Because I’m pretty sure the Ultimate Nullifier beats Ea.

Ikari345

@Ghostwolf2022 Hi I'm new here and i saw and read your post on the comments for this person's story and well it's true the power scaling of Servants in fate is ridiculous and you're right that they would beat out most marvel Combatants well at least the lesser known marvel characters but higher-tier ones would totally surpassed most if not all servants and Fate in general especially the likes of Iron man, doctor doom, thor (Marvel's version) doctor strange, scarlet witch, ghost rider, Galactus And even the freaking Magento and apocalypse I mean have you seen the death battle episodes covering these two omega-level mutants and other marvel death battle base episodes And especially the two hulk base episodes and with the new one coming out soon.This is just my thought and opinion on your post but just saying that while servants and type_moon characters are ridiculous powerful and the nasuverse is complex and difficult to understand marvel itself just Absurd and asinine.
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Ghostwolf2022

@JulianSummers777 admittedly that would be a cool look.  And who knows maybe there’s a universe where Gilgamesh did just that.
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JulianSummers777

@Ghostwolf2022 though, imagine a servant like Gilgamesh becoming  a Harold to Galactus, turning him into like the golden Surfer.
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