Type: Marvel

@Into_The_Saberverse You should ne proud. I've only just finished part 1 but it was good. Way better than anything "professionals" do these days.
          	  
          	  Peter was on point, a bit MCU feeling but hey, he ain't Peter Dorker for no reason, a nerd with a hero complex the size of the moon? Perfection.
          	  
          	  Saber is as awesome as always, a soldier essentially just discovering her discarded emotions again, falling in love, finally being selfish for once? Chef's Kiss.
          	  
          	  Rin, I don't think I've seen a truer depiction, other than abridged, yet, the team offer was a bit sudden true, but honestly? Definitely something she'd do.
          	  
          	  Rouge, I'm gonna be frank with you I'd never even heard of her backstory but personally you executed it to nigh perfection. From her and Heracles' introduction to Kirei's involvement... Stop making me blush so bloody much dangit, this is some high quality shit!
          	  
          	  Johnny is bloody Johnny, and I'll admit I don't remember much of MJ because Paul is... So much of a dissapointment. Seriously, Marvel? Could have been a bit more subtle.
          	  
          	  But anyway, they were good, as I said Johnny is Johnny you can't really go wrong there unless you're Marvel, and MJ feels so much like Spectacular it hurts. Given what I remember of it anyway. I should rewatch that.
          	  
          	  Whatever, point is, you do good work. Be proud, we'll follow you the whole way.
          	  
          	  I mean you introduced me Toaru for God's sake and I'm still riding that train! You think I'm just gonna forget that?

@Into_The_Saberverse their review doesn’t seem so bad. Although I’ll admit that those certain choice of words definitely wouldn’t inspire confidence. Also they seemed to mostly be talking about the first chapter.
          	  
          	  But another reviewer from later seemed to understand that you were foreshadowing events for later when name dropping certain characters. Helps that they finished the first part before making a review.
          	  
          	  Also get the slight impression that they’re not 100% in depth in Marvel lore as they are with Fate. One questioned why Spider-Man would have Bullet Time and another believed this to be Film centered.
          	  
          	  Another believed Doom wouldn’t bother having anything to do with the Holy Grail. Even though stealing Magic Powers and Artifacts of Power is basically Doom’s MO.

@Into_The_Saberverse I guess we rushed our judgement too quickly. However, when you said their feedback doesn’t inspired confidence for you as a writer, I thought that they didn’t give you a constructive criticism before you informed us with more information. So, I’m sorry for making a quick judgement, but I’m glad that you’re doing well.