Hello Inuhoseki, just dropped by to say.. your book called “Outlook”. Is a absolute masterpiece, it made my day reading it. Some scenes made me sad along with some ended me up wheezing, like for example when Outlook Geno changed his code to look like Fresh. And made a absolute fool of himself infront of Dust!Fresh, just out of boredom. In my opinion you shouldn’t change a single thing, but hey! My opinion NOT yours feel free to change your book. It’s yours and only yours after all. ^^