Hi, I've been reading your story a bit...and I've seen how good you are!
If I'm not asking too much could you please take a look at my story? It's not quite like yours, but the themes are pretty much the same.
I'm asking because I noticed that only the prologue was read and that's it, you know, I don't have much experience in writing even though I changed my account I've been here since 2017! If you could give me some advice I would be grateful!
'Beg the villain for forgiveness' is the name, while my account is called Jexnnxyz.
Thanks.