Umm.hi, so I read your book. His darkest temptation and the plot was nice, but for me, the writing was a bit too idk but formal cause the characters were always calling themselves by the titles like wife and daughter and husband it made it a bit too weird and the smut part was just too idk but plain cause u used words like va*** and the male lead was obsessed with her ni***** too much you could have just made it obvious that he had a kink . Tbh, the plot is good, but the writing was just too basic for me. I just thought I'd let you know. I'm just giving a little bit of criticism
