IronWeaver

Hey umm, I know you always criticing some people story, so wouldn't you mind read and critic this one? 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/275442618?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=epiceratos&wp_originator=qj%2BfjY1bp3Ra9hBAPARhvsXJfUEQkCb6dFxRuxwZnw5CKTyi%2BV7ktpt4cVkZoWUF3%2BxPUz%2FPiHVgnYLg1tzBp8vrxMfJ%2FEoQJyLd%2B9NOcV7KpOpWSWf9XaVzsxQbL7Co
          
          Take not that it's not created by me and the story kinda wank, thank you.