Hey, I just came from reading the baby sister story of yours and I must say, I like it. But you could you possibly try to add some extra chapters to give it a happy ending. For example, one of the chapters could be that Summer is still alive but she was just in a coma. Another one could be of Summer growing up, at about 16, finding a boyfriend, and seeing how JJ would react to this entire thing. I literally read this after 5 months of watching season 4, and I'm still suffering after JJ's death. So it could be a little bit more nice if both Maybanks were alive in the book:)