IsabelMariahHon

I have a feeling that so many that I knew here have already gone... But I might as well try this platform again. See if I can get anything up.

IsabelMariahHon

...OK... Uh... I'm in a bit of a dilemma here as to whether or not I should remove The Black Bag for the time being. 
          
          First off, I've been reviewing the overall plot of the story thus far and I found that there are some parts that need editing and others that need more sense in them. 
          
          Another reason is that I'm currently at a loss on how to continue despite having the plot literally burnt into memory... like I know what is supposed to come next but I have no idea how to execute it without making things choppy and raising eyebrows. Even I'm confused on where this is going, I kid you not. :S
          
          Not sure if anybody would see this, but I would like to hear from you guys what you think I should do with this project, especially since I feel really stuck in a loop right now. Also, sorry for those who have been following the story for so long and haven't gotten any updates. Been doing things here and there, graduated two weeks ago and now deciding on what to do next. Also, brain won't shut up about other story concepts that I don't think of putting up because they're either unoriginal or they don't make sense. :p
          
          Anyway, hope to hear something from you soon. Thanks for the support.
          
          P.S. to Wiegenlied and Haruka Fukawa (or Schneezed), thanks again to both of you for your help with this story. Sorry that I'm not keeping up much. Hope you guys are well and kicking. :)
          
          <3<3<3

Schneezed

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I’m so sorry for never seeing this! 
            
            Not knowing how to continue a book is common - hell, I took down an entire series just because I didn’t know what the fuck I was doing. But now they’re back and I’m so proud of them. It’s a lot of effort, but I think you can do it! You’re already an amazing author, and Black Bag is one of the most intriguing books I’ve ever read, so with uni out of the way (congrats on graduating by the way!) I think it’s possible.
            
            If you’re thinking of other concepts, then working on those might actually help. I know when I was stuck in a rut I started trying other stuff and that lead to me fixing my story continuum. Plus it’s fun to try something else once in a while, the last thing you want is for this to feel like a dead end project. 
            
            I believe in you, Ivu-chan. You can do it :)
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IsabelMariahHon

Finally back again. So sorry for not being here for so long, especially to those keeping in touch with The Black Bag. Part 2 is back in progress, though updates may be a bit jumpy and inconsistent at times. Hope you will enjoy the new stuff I'll be adding in.
          
          Thank you again for the support.
          
          <3<3<3

Schneezed

Hi Ivu-Chan! I wanted to thank you for all the votes and comments on Status: Online! You actually pushed the book over 800 views which really means a lot. I hope you continue to enjoy the book as I update in the future (with even more references). Have a wonderful day!
               -Haru x

Schneezed

Thanks! I liked the name Yuki, but there was this weird pink haired girl following me around everywhere so I had to change it Fukawa (also I just really like Toko's character from Danganronpa). And I'm seriously glad you like Status. It's my first completed work, so I'm super proud of it. Which is why -in case you hadn't heard- there's going to be a series of books in that universe. Which I am ridiculous happy to begin publishing soon! As for Cameron and Edward's story, there'll be a few bumps here and there but I'm not about to spoil it for you. Happy reading!
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IsabelMariahHon

@HarukaFukawa Happy for you, bro! I haven't been on for soooo long, I just had to pick somethin', and yours was the first choice! The story is really cute so far!! My God, I just want Edward and Cameron to get together and make out already!!! XD Have a good one too, Haru-chan!! Oh, and love the new profile pic and name, by the way. ;)
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Schneezed

Thanks so much for the all votes and comments on my book, Ivu-chan! It really means a lot ^~^

Schneezed

It's fine: good luck with your exams Ivu-Chan ^~^
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IsabelMariahHon

@HarukaYuki- You're very welcome. Your work is really good. Seriously. Sorry for taking so long to answer this, by the way - exams were hectic. :)
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IsabelMariahHon

Decided to start a new piece. The Black Bag is something to test myself to write in a slightly different style, trying to make the chapters a little shorter yet keeping details without being too overboard. If anyone starts getting confused on how the story is going, I'm trying to tell the story in a nonlinear order. Think 'Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya' - the show's season 1 episodes was aired that way initially to have the viewer make the connection themselves.
          
          Hope you guys will like it. Feel free to notify me on what parts to improve on. Like I said, this is a test to try a different writing style so yeah, I'd like to have some feedback. Be honest too please. :)