Will you continually be updating your two stories, besides the short story? They look interesting, but I've already read a couple of stories which became discontinued (which is rather a mix of emotions between regret and sadness).
Not to push you to do so, I know writing is a tedious and sometimes even annoying process. I myself have tried to post many stories, only to grow bored of them at the expense of my readers, so now I pretype a majority of the story and then begin posting xD
Also your short story with the Siren was a pleasant read, it seemed like appropiate vocabulary came natural to you, which is awesome.
Many thanks,
RaspberryLemonade