Isabella midorya

Oiê poderia por favor me ajudar olhando minha fanfic? Ela é do Ace( One Piece)
          Espero que goste .
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/353934423?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=julihx&wp_originator=Emta%2F6CCKX8H3DhBLpTNi63WhTp9QTOYiRxGnKYdNIYSDiJ9g5B9VEGMj5Pf723%2BQ0LKmjtXdACTTBxkZWCbLdaF%2F%2BvHGghJDqrrnoWx%2BhpWlvTzHJs0AfQek9xJ6%2FRk

Oi, lê ai
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1297651871?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading_part_end&wp_uname=diabofranjudo&wp_originator=uffnHteb%2FMEz2xr94RPK8jCWAP3ZC6ITs2kA3Kgu1pHEe6UFP2BF7Tm%2BhXWEi1uauUMCCSAtrmNHZGEqoCRK6oFk7uFfY5yAAJxt46ifhFxnKoGHd3UcAaIyVHniyKw4