IsauraLiraGreene

I was just wondering what you all think of Lit Reactor, The Next Big Writer, and Scribophile. What site do you think is the best?

JohnGunningham

@IsauraLiraGreene Scribophile is pretty good, way more professional than Wattpad, but it can take a while to get critiques through unless you offer incentives (extra points)
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IsauraLiraGreene

I was just wondering what you all think of Lit Reactor, The Next Big Writer, and Scribophile. What site do you think is the best?

JohnGunningham

@IsauraLiraGreene Scribophile is pretty good, way more professional than Wattpad, but it can take a while to get critiques through unless you offer incentives (extra points)
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IsauraLiraGreene

@YuffieProductions 
          
          1) teen lust/ angst
          
          the book had this almost pornographic appeal. The actions were highlighted slowly yet with the idea that they were so important and beautiful that they were hooking. (This was when I was little) 
          
          2) excellent commercial selling skills. I think some of it comes from that fact that Meyer loves her book and her character (probably a bit too much). 
          
          3) Details. Okay, so most of it was bad and illogical but Meyer attempted. I think they were interesting to readers who are less visual or imaginative or that but without the left Brain logical at all. They were so many details and this sort swooshing wispy voice, a
          all of it was meticulous crammed to give an illusion of a complex world. I  think that in some instances this is a useful technique because we can't possibly create an entire parallel universe to the atomic level (maybe we could) in just words. There many novels that make a complex small society or system society structure but leave out a lot of things. I think writing is part illusion. It's dangerous though, because it also takes time and skill (obviously). I know some people were also impressed on the vocabulary. I think this is because a lot of people don't look words up in the Dictionary. 
          
          4) The voice
          
          I  think it's the "in your head" attitude but it's this stigma that most teens, actually most people have where they don't think outside their own ego's and thought's and I think that I have the illusion of character and possibly plot. The Self-absorbed know-your-self-think-feel connection was just very humane even though the rest of the character was a Mary-sue princess who couldn't do anything. 

IsauraLiraGreene

@YuffieProductions I love them! Have you heard of escala!

IsauraLiraGreene

@IsauraLiraGreene yeah, they are a group of four electric string musicians
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YuffieProductions

@IsauraLiraGreene i havent! ill look them up
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