@Rosal_x_fkff Hie my lil angel please don’t overthink
You wrote so beautifully I swear I’ve always loved your story so much and I’m really not telling you to change anything because your writing already feels so special
I would love to see more of Sara and Aditi in this story because I really adore them together
And maybe some real base incidents too that would make it even more emotional and relatable for me
That’s honestly it your story is already lovely keep writing because you’re genuinely talented