Hey,
First of all I really do appreciate this. I am kind noobie in this stuff but I know this is not an excuse, so I am practicing more English because it is my second language and I am not the 'best' of English... But I am trying and you are just telling me an advice which is so cool and want to promise you that I am going to try harder to improve myself. Thank you so much!
P.S. I love tour stories so much! They are insanely cool! I hope that someday (probably after an eternity, or never) I could be as good as you at writing stories. Thank you again so much! I love you so much for your advice and like you said your "criticism". You know what, I love that "criticism" because with it you can save someone's butt. I hope we could talk again soon! Bye!❤️
-IsiCat5