Isolophila

Yaar didi .Mujhe  deewani didi logo se dar lagne laga hain . Like mujhe honestly laga tha wo log sach bol rehe the .Maine ek post bhi likhi thi demanding for truth for kisine kuch likha aur delete hogya meine kuch bura bhi nehi likha tha yaar. Aplog please isme jyada mast involve ho.

Isolophila

Yaar didi .Mujhe  deewani didi logo se dar lagne laga hain . Like mujhe honestly laga tha wo log sach bol rehe the .Maine ek post bhi likhi thi demanding for truth for kisine kuch likha aur delete hogya meine kuch bura bhi nehi likha tha yaar. Aplog please isme jyada mast involve ho.

transientjuice

Hello! You recently posted your story on my message board so I thought I would take a look. You might not have seen my bio, but I like to give feedback on stories that are shared with me. For yours, I enjoyed how the prologue gives off a mysterious feeling, feeding just enough information to make me want know more. The biggest thing I would change is formatting (switches between points of view, character labeling).
          
          I would really appreciate if you took a look at my story too.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/368376659?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=transientjuice

Isolophila

@transientjuice  ohh thanks i would look into your book
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