Grim_Reaper_Monarch
Hi! I'm really really sorry if this sounds rude but I really like your story. I think your an amazing writer but some of your grammer makes it a bit confusing to read at times so if you're ok with it could I possibly give you a few tips to make your story flow a bit easier?
Again I'm really sorry if this sounds judgemental or rude, its not supposed to be. Thank you
Grim_Reaper_Monarch
I know, I just like it when people give me tips on how to better improve my work and writing, so I figured I would spread the knowledge. But I really do like your story. Keep up the good work!!
