ItsGruxien

I'll do a few rewrites on early chapters to match the current change of premise in the story. I will put a rewrite label on the title if the said chapters have been rewritten

Fuzukas

@ItsGruxien ok
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ItsGruxien

What should I do with Elle and Amir? They weren't part of my original plan. But since I decided to change it into a sequel from EATM2, they are some changes I made. But for some reason, I feel they aren't that bad. Maybe they are just dedicated to their job, but too blind to see that Othman is... y'know what I mean. Since we only have movie 2 as a way to know their personalities currently, I can't really say much. What do you think?

ItsGruxien

@Fuzukas I thought of someone... other than Hisham. But damn I don't know how you'll take it
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Fuzukas

@ItsGruxien with hisyam? That would be good too
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ItsGruxien

@Fuzukas What if I replace...Othman? Of course, Elle and Amir would be good characters
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ItsGruxien

I need your opinion. Do the current chapters (chapter 6 and 7) aligned with the perception you guys have from the first chapter? Because I thought it could be confusing to you guys as I changed my plan for the story midway. 
          
          You could see it from the starting of the first bits of Chapter 7. And when you read the first chapter again after reading this chapter, you could feel something doesn't feel right.
          
          I could rewrite the first chapter a bit make it aligned with the current plan I have, if needed. Let me know about your opinion, thank you ^^