@ItsJustMeEfsevi
Hi sunshine ! Can u check my book ? It's 100% worth it ! https://www.wattpad.com/story/240270391?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=mariast0ry_kim&wp_originator=XGq6hc5JYsDrroWG%2Fwoysbu8iTvPffks28Qqo6KzwqVwO8CUoQyx6KegkOnmapZmAYAbJ7mW%2BmjJZuru2YY33yZZVeUtY0%2FL0OJB6iQ6lHWFakQIoVG4GjJVyJ0UocM5
I'm baaaack!!
hoping that i will stay to finish my work
Hello! You can call me Drik!! Hoping we get along quickly!!
Will you please check out a story I've been writing, named "Mates | YOONSEOK" ?
Also, please give your feedback, it'll mean the world to me!
https://my.w.tt/AkKxxOpt77
@ planetbangtans yep I'm back
@ minstraes hey
Be the change you want to see in the world, の日本語バージョンは初めて(笑)
I really enjoy the story of "Struggle". In my opinion tha story is creative, and interesting, I believe a lot of people can realte to the main character, so I can say that the chracters are realistic.
I'm only at chapter 14, but I noticed that you stopped writing or something because of the negative comments. Although your english is not fully gramatically correct at some places, but that shpuldn't be that big of a problem. I'm going to be honest with you: not correct language can make readers distrupted a bit, and that happened to me a few times.
I'm here to offer you my help. If you want, I can help you with english, we could practice together, 'cause I need some practice too. We could help each other, because I noticed you know a lot of phrases I didn't know, so I could learn a few things from you, and meanwhile you could learn a few things from me.
I'm not here as a negative critic, I want to help you grow, while you can help me grow too. I think you should think my offering through, and answer when you can, I'm available almost all the time.
- Cristina
@Krisuta hey! thanks for offering your help! you can send me inbox so we can talk more if you want
I noticed that you put your story 'struggle' on hold. And I think I know why. Don't let the hate get to you, like seriously, those who stopped reading are not true readers. You're a talented writer whose plots are so detailed and so impressive man. Advice though, update every weekend so you at least have an updating schedule to start.
I know that some people who once read 'struggle' no longer do it and Im aware of that's because of me. But thare are some people who still wait for me to update. And I have to tell you that new chapter will be on in some days!
https://my.w.tt/UiNb/1uowTMmkbI Τσέκαρε την ιστορία μου και αν σου αρέσει υποστήριξε την ❤