ItsMorganSwint

Chapter 1 and 6 are now properly formatted edited. I apologize for that hot mess.

Yet again having to go back through the chapters and edit indentations cause Wattpad wants to be really heckin' complicated about copy/paste. 
          
          I apologize for the eye sores that are my poorly formatted chapters. 

Chapter Five is now properly edited and formatted, as it should've been when I copy/pasted it from Word. Now, it's easy to read. New chapter coming soon! Avery arrives in Venusia to meet the second Creator. Her entrance into the new world officially begins, and soon she will be entering evolved society. This chapter is full of new discoveries and whimsy. I'm excited for you all to read it.

Genuinely blows my mind how when I copy/paste my chapters here on my desktop, Wattpad somehow magically creates some typos near the end of each chapter. I only just now noticed this, most common is smashing two words together. What the heck? 

Posting a new Zoella chapter soon. This will be the first little hint at what exactly she's up against. 
          
          Surrounded by people that shrug her off with a scoff, people that treat her like a naive, doe eyed girl, Zoella gains kernels of courage as she embarks on her own investigation, scrambling for answers as to where her sister vanished, and who is involved. Everyone becomes a suspect, and Zoella begins to slowly lessen her trust in those she holds dear. And soon, she'll replace her meek heart with one of stone. Soon, she'll gain her voice and the heavens will hear it. 

The part of my story posted on here so far is officially formatted appropriately. It took a lot of manual indentations and shirt+enter's, but it's finally up to code, so to speak. Adding next chapter soon!

And again, after proofreading here, I notice Wattpad crunched a lot of my words and formatting. Copy/Pasting from Word has been such a nuisance. I'm fixing that today as well.

After a millionth time of proofreading, I've noticed that I have a bad habit of writing in past tense during first person POV present scenes. I'm fixing that now and will update the chapters that had that issue. I'm also updating the prologue to scratch out the overuse of the word "sentience", and replace it with more appropriate metaphors. Thank you for taking the time to read me. ❤️

Is it awful to hate one of my chapters, only keeping it because it's imperative to the plot line? Yeeaaa, that's how I feel about Chapter 1.  I love my story, don't get me wrong, but I would've started with Chapt 2 instead if Zoella's first scene wasn't absolutely needed. But alas, everything happens for a reason. 

What I had posted before, except the prologue, was scrapped. My story has always been the same, but now it's more well-written as it deserves to be. I hope you guys like it, and I appreciate all constructive feedback.