@Kaite7890 oh my mewz!! thank you Luna! i feel very proud and happy to know someone like you im able to cheer up! As long as tips go, just let your creativity flow! Editing always makes everything better for a first try! I, myself arent so proud of my stories, but, yea. Another tip would be to get certain ideas from other stories, but make it in your own style and mash it up with your own creativity ^w^