While reading chapters 1 and 2, I realized that Y/N feels kinda all over the place, not in a good way and I didn't really like it. After re-reading I cringed a bit at some (most) parts so I'ma change it, not completely but to at least make her and the story feel cannon or something.
What are some suggestions, character traits, or stuff y'all want Y/N to have to feel cannon? Or something to make her actually relatable to y'all and not something that's the complete opposite?