Its_Parks

@vanillarose_stories Yw! I commented on it, I really don't think there's a lot to improve on! Maybe just don't feel the need to add in brackets things like "I know that's a girl's name, bear with me" - the audience/readers will figure out themselves! Try not to "spoil" the "twist" beforehand xx

@vanillarose_stories thanks sis, so what do you think I could improve in?