Its_Raye

Merry Christmas! Normally I’d update spitfire for a treat but unfortunately I’ve been unwell, so it’s gonna come in a few days instead: I hope everyone has had a mint day and some great food <3

Alice_-_-Cullen

@Its_Raye 
          	  
          	  Are you feeling better??
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Its_Raye

If Elias had gotten tattoo’s- what do you think he would have gotten? I’m currently rewriting spitfire and cannot get the idea of depressed new moon Elias finding the pain of a tattoo addicting and getting a bunch of them, but what tattoo would he get? Who for, if so? Or just random? 

Alice_-_-Cullen

@Its_Raye 
            
            How far do the back scars go down? Taking @The_Batman_08 idea maybe he could have Angel wings on his lower back in the area where people get a 'tramp stamp'. If that location isn't available then maybe under his collarbones?
            
            Sorry lmao I'm just reading all of the comments but maybe he could get a J.H. tattoo in a tiny font next to a vein on his left wrist because one, the left wrists blood flow goes quicker to the heart and 2, the vein carries blood so it can symbolise the vampirism he was involved with but also how fast Jasper was let into his heart? 
            
            And then much like Easton in the future, maybe Eli could get a tattoo on his pinky saying brother promise and that's where Easton got the inspiration from when he was older?
            
            I'm not sure if it's stated but Eli seems like a converse wearer especially when he skates so maybe he could get the word converse tattooed on the back of one of his heels and then a skateboard on the back of the other?
            
            What about a tattoo of the pendant Eli ends up giving Easton? Or maybe a tattoo of a smiley face Easton drew for him?
            
            Then of course he has to get something to symbolise Jace, so maybe like an outline of a wolf or a full moon? 
            
            I heard also that the ribs are the most painful place to get a tattoo so maybe he gets some there? I feel like he'd get something written across his ribcage like a lyric from one of his favourite bands. Oh maybe from that song that was playing in the car with Jasper that one time at the beginning of the book?
            
            I feel like a zippo lighter next to a cigarette would be pretty cool. Maybe he could get a tattoo somewhere that just says B♡ for Bella?
            
            This is so much omg I'm so sorry lmao
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The_Batman_08

@Its_Raye omg I forgot :(
            Maybe a forearm tattoo, or on his wrist?
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Its_Raye

@The_Batman_08  don’t the amount of back tattoos I wanted to give him but he’s got burn scars all over his back so it’s impossible :( 
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AllisonSams4

You should make an extra chapter in spitfire of jasper being a bottom 

Alice_-_-Cullen

@Its_Raye 
            
            It literally makes my heart fuzz up omg
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Its_Raye

@Alice_-_-Cullen THIS IS SO CUTE ONG
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Alice_-_-Cullen

@Its_Raye 
            
            Maybe he's like in a restaurant or something with Bella pretending to be human and overhears the children (I just quickly re read the chapter and it's a girl and a boy so cute aaah!) And maybe they're complaining about School being hard and boring or something and about how their dad is pissed at them for hiding the TV remotes. Eli sees skateboards behind their chairs and then they start talking about how Easton got the job at Forks High and how embarrassing it is for their dad to be working at their high-school. This is just coming out of my brain btw u don't have to use it haha but i know how easy it is to have a prompt.
            
            Then maybe the brother leans over after their conversation about something and promises his sister with a brother promise.
            
            AHHH ITS SO CUTE STOP 
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koko_41484

Hello! Can I ask what happened to Insanity? I’ve reread the story probably a dozen times if I’m being honest, but I just went to look for it and it shows up in my archive but says the page has been lost. 
          
          Even if you did remove it, I just want to say that it is/was one of my favorite Derek Hale fics! A go-to offline read, and yeah. Just overall one of my favorites!

Alice_-_-Cullen

Wasn't it Jasper and Elias' birthday the other day!?

Alice_-_-Cullen

@Its_Raye 
            
            I'm sure Elias doesn't really care haha, he's not that sentimental about birthdays. 
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Its_Raye

@Alice_-_-Cullen the 13th of August - poor Elias and Jasper. Didn’t even get a happy bday from their creator 
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Its_Raye

I’m slowly but surely editing Spitfire. Every chapter I’m editing will have a • in the title. There will be changes in the writing style, alongside some extra passages in the story as I try smooth issues I’ve found with the plot and how I’ve written some characters. As you’re aware, my writing does improve as I progress the story, since it took me so long to finish it, so I’m making sure all the earlier chapters have the same standard as the later ones. There shouldn’t be too much change- but knowing me, I will probably extend each chapter a little. 
          
          I hope you’re ok! Love you all :) 

Immortal_Myth

@Its_Raye Love you too and I also hope you're doing okay :)
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Immortal_Myth

@Its_Raye Oh good idea!
            Jeez I can't believe it's been almost an entire year since it finished....I gotta say, so happy that I spent those years waiting and reading it's updates as it's one of my absolute favourite books I've ever read ❤️ So funnily enough, that actually works in my favour cuz I was planning on re-reading Spitfire at some point 
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