Its_Raye
Merry Christmas! Normally I’d update spitfire for a treat but unfortunately I’ve been unwell, so it’s gonna come in a few days instead: I hope everyone has had a mint day and some great food <3
Its_Raye
Its_Raye
If Elias had gotten tattoo’s- what do you think he would have gotten? I’m currently rewriting spitfire and cannot get the idea of depressed new moon Elias finding the pain of a tattoo addicting and getting a bunch of them, but what tattoo would he get? Who for, if so? Or just random?
Its_Raye
@The_Batman_08 don’t the amount of back tattoos I wanted to give him but he’s got burn scars all over his back so it’s impossible :(
Alice_-_-Cullen
@Its_Raye Stop yes as heartbreaking as that is their growing relationship will always have my heart
AllisonSams4
You should make an extra chapter in spitfire of jasper being a bottom
Alice_-_-Cullen
@Its_Raye Maybe he's like in a restaurant or something with Bella pretending to be human and overhears the children (I just quickly re read the chapter and it's a girl and a boy so cute aaah!) And maybe they're complaining about School being hard and boring or something and about how their dad is pissed at them for hiding the TV remotes. Eli sees skateboards behind their chairs and then they start talking about how Easton got the job at Forks High and how embarrassing it is for their dad to be working at their high-school. This is just coming out of my brain btw u don't have to use it haha but i know how easy it is to have a prompt. Then maybe the brother leans over after their conversation about something and promises his sister with a brother promise. AHHH ITS SO CUTE STOP
koko_41484
Hello! Can I ask what happened to Insanity? I’ve reread the story probably a dozen times if I’m being honest, but I just went to look for it and it shows up in my archive but says the page has been lost.
Even if you did remove it, I just want to say that it is/was one of my favorite Derek Hale fics! A go-to offline read, and yeah. Just overall one of my favorites!
Its_Raye
Chapter 4 of spitfire has been updated and edited.
Its_Raye
Chapter Three of Spitfire edited and uploaded: word count before: 6080.
Word count after: 8000.
Alice_-_-Cullen
Wasn't it Jasper and Elias' birthday the other day!?
Alice_-_-Cullen
@Its_Raye I'm sure Elias doesn't really care haha, he's not that sentimental about birthdays.
Its_Raye
@Alice_-_-Cullen the 13th of August - poor Elias and Jasper. Didn’t even get a happy bday from their creator
Its_Raye
Spitfire, Chapter two is edited and published. Word count before 7377. Word count after, 9679.
Its_Raye
I’m slowly but surely editing Spitfire. Every chapter I’m editing will have a • in the title. There will be changes in the writing style, alongside some extra passages in the story as I try smooth issues I’ve found with the plot and how I’ve written some characters. As you’re aware, my writing does improve as I progress the story, since it took me so long to finish it, so I’m making sure all the earlier chapters have the same standard as the later ones. There shouldn’t be too much change- but knowing me, I will probably extend each chapter a little.
I hope you’re ok! Love you all :)
Immortal_Myth
@Its_Raye Oh good idea! Jeez I can't believe it's been almost an entire year since it finished....I gotta say, so happy that I spent those years waiting and reading it's updates as it's one of my absolute favourite books I've ever read ❤️ So funnily enough, that actually works in my favour cuz I was planning on re-reading Spitfire at some point