Its_Raye

If Elias had gotten tattoo’s- what do you think he would have gotten? I’m currently rewriting spitfire and cannot get the idea of depressed new moon Elias finding the pain of a tattoo addicting and getting a bunch of them, but what tattoo would he get? Who for, if so? Or just random? 

Alice_-_-Cullen

@Its_Raye 
          	  
          	  How far do the back scars go down? Taking @The_Batman_08 idea maybe he could have Angel wings on his lower back in the area where people get a 'tramp stamp'. If that location isn't available then maybe under his collarbones?
          	  
          	  Sorry lmao I'm just reading all of the comments but maybe he could get a J.H. tattoo in a tiny font next to a vein on his left wrist because one, the left wrists blood flow goes quicker to the heart and 2, the vein carries blood so it can symbolise the vampirism he was involved with but also how fast Jasper was let into his heart? 
          	  
          	  And then much like Easton in the future, maybe Eli could get a tattoo on his pinky saying brother promise and that's where Easton got the inspiration from when he was older?
          	  
          	  I'm not sure if it's stated but Eli seems like a converse wearer especially when he skates so maybe he could get the word converse tattooed on the back of one of his heels and then a skateboard on the back of the other?
          	  
          	  What about a tattoo of the pendant Eli ends up giving Easton? Or maybe a tattoo of a smiley face Easton drew for him?
          	  
          	  Then of course he has to get something to symbolise Jace, so maybe like an outline of a wolf or a full moon? 
          	  
          	  I heard also that the ribs are the most painful place to get a tattoo so maybe he gets some there? I feel like he'd get something written across his ribcage like a lyric from one of his favourite bands. Oh maybe from that song that was playing in the car with Jasper that one time at the beginning of the book?
          	  
          	  I feel like a zippo lighter next to a cigarette would be pretty cool. Maybe he could get a tattoo somewhere that just says B♡ for Bella?
          	  
          	  This is so much omg I'm so sorry lmao
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The_Batman_08

@Its_Raye omg I forgot :(
          	  Maybe a forearm tattoo, or on his wrist?
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Its_Raye

@The_Batman_08  don’t the amount of back tattoos I wanted to give him but he’s got burn scars all over his back so it’s impossible :( 
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Sapphire_Undines26

Heeeey, I loved Spitfire so much even when I had to wait a little while for the last few chapters. But I was wondering if you had any tips for those of us inspired by you to start writing fanfiction like it. AND a good way to make those character boards in the first part. 

Its_Raye

Hi!! I’d say don’t be afraid to change the main story/plot of the story you’re creating a fanfic from as much as you want and make sure it’s something you want to read - feeding into what potential readers views can want can be exciting, but many times have gone back and thought actually I want ‘xyz’ to do this now. I’d also say it’s a lot of fun and don’t stress too much about it in the end (aka, how I do!). For mood boards, Pinterest is a lot of help- my profile has twilight aesthetics if you need inspiration or help. I use the studio app (it’s free) to create them. 
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KrystalBowen7

Hey! I just got done reading spitfire. And that is all I can think of now. Tbh I think you ruined jasper fanfics for me bc nothing else will be as good as this one. It was #1 I loved it and wish it didn’t end. Now the last chapter the one narrated by Arden you said you heard that everyone wanted him and Easton to get together and you said that you didn’t want to put it into just a chapter. And said if we wanted a whole book lyk. Well I do. I needed it as of last week fully published at least a day or so long   that’s all I can think of now. You are such an amazing writer keep it up! Thank you again for ur amazing book. 10/10 

Its_Raye

I love you so much hahaa
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Sparky_Blue

CONGRATULATIONS!! 
          
          Spitfire has 1 MILLION views! I'm so proud of the work you've put into it! I remember when you were still writing it and now it's done and now it's so huge!! You deserve every ounce of positivity you gain from your masterpiece! So proud of you Raye

Its_Raye

You’re so sweet for pointing this out - im sorry it took two months for me to reply :( 
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CalicoHugs

Just taking the time to let you know your work on spitfire is one of my absolute favorites of all time. I find myself coming back to reread it countless times (though I don't comment very often ) I have voted on every single chapter. Wishing you all the best!

Its_Raye

If Elias had gotten tattoo’s- what do you think he would have gotten? I’m currently rewriting spitfire and cannot get the idea of depressed new moon Elias finding the pain of a tattoo addicting and getting a bunch of them, but what tattoo would he get? Who for, if so? Or just random? 

Alice_-_-Cullen

@Its_Raye 
            
            How far do the back scars go down? Taking @The_Batman_08 idea maybe he could have Angel wings on his lower back in the area where people get a 'tramp stamp'. If that location isn't available then maybe under his collarbones?
            
            Sorry lmao I'm just reading all of the comments but maybe he could get a J.H. tattoo in a tiny font next to a vein on his left wrist because one, the left wrists blood flow goes quicker to the heart and 2, the vein carries blood so it can symbolise the vampirism he was involved with but also how fast Jasper was let into his heart? 
            
            And then much like Easton in the future, maybe Eli could get a tattoo on his pinky saying brother promise and that's where Easton got the inspiration from when he was older?
            
            I'm not sure if it's stated but Eli seems like a converse wearer especially when he skates so maybe he could get the word converse tattooed on the back of one of his heels and then a skateboard on the back of the other?
            
            What about a tattoo of the pendant Eli ends up giving Easton? Or maybe a tattoo of a smiley face Easton drew for him?
            
            Then of course he has to get something to symbolise Jace, so maybe like an outline of a wolf or a full moon? 
            
            I heard also that the ribs are the most painful place to get a tattoo so maybe he gets some there? I feel like he'd get something written across his ribcage like a lyric from one of his favourite bands. Oh maybe from that song that was playing in the car with Jasper that one time at the beginning of the book?
            
            I feel like a zippo lighter next to a cigarette would be pretty cool. Maybe he could get a tattoo somewhere that just says B♡ for Bella?
            
            This is so much omg I'm so sorry lmao
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The_Batman_08

@Its_Raye omg I forgot :(
            Maybe a forearm tattoo, or on his wrist?
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Its_Raye

@The_Batman_08  don’t the amount of back tattoos I wanted to give him but he’s got burn scars all over his back so it’s impossible :( 
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AllisonSams4

You should make an extra chapter in spitfire of jasper being a bottom 

Alice_-_-Cullen

@Its_Raye 
            
            It literally makes my heart fuzz up omg
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Its_Raye

@Alice_-_-Cullen THIS IS SO CUTE ONG
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Alice_-_-Cullen

@Its_Raye 
            
            Maybe he's like in a restaurant or something with Bella pretending to be human and overhears the children (I just quickly re read the chapter and it's a girl and a boy so cute aaah!) And maybe they're complaining about School being hard and boring or something and about how their dad is pissed at them for hiding the TV remotes. Eli sees skateboards behind their chairs and then they start talking about how Easton got the job at Forks High and how embarrassing it is for their dad to be working at their high-school. This is just coming out of my brain btw u don't have to use it haha but i know how easy it is to have a prompt.
            
            Then maybe the brother leans over after their conversation about something and promises his sister with a brother promise.
            
            AHHH ITS SO CUTE STOP 
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