Hi hi :) You were the one who asked me to check your story, ahaha remember? So ang masasabi ko.. I like it! Hahaha superb! Pero i-ano ko lang sana yung tungkol sa punctuations and spaces, and also mas maganda kung magdagdag ka pa ng emotions and such. So.. yun lang naman. Can't wait for the next update! Ganda ng story hehez.