Itsme1325

Hey!! I just published my first book and I would love for you to check it out, whenever you have the time :)) It's in my profile. Don't forget to vote and comment what you think!! <33

Hey gurl
          
          I just completed reading your story. Firstly, I would like to bring your attention over the fact that your book is still a baby. The plot hasn't actually started as such. Henceforth, forming an opinion over your book doesn't even make sense.
          
          The best part of your book was sarcasm scattered here and there in a very rightful amount. It bonds the reader to your character.
          
          The vocabulary used was satisfactory :) i.e neither extravagant nor malnutritioned. 
          
          Grammatical errors weren't much but yeah, you have to work on your sentence construction. Sometimes your sentences are muddled together. 
          
          
          There were a few times wherein I found myself bored out (I am being brutually honest). It depends on a person's taste but still I think you rlly gotta work over the story. Every person has a way of writing and being honest, I think you can really work upon the way you wrote.
          
          
          I recommend you to read some good works. They'll help you build up thrillers, cliffhangers, smart endings and all sort of other elements.
          
          Hope that it helps
          
          LONG LIVE
          KTS♤
          
          

hey I am so sorry to disturb you love but would you mind checking my book souvenir out...it would mean a lot to me and I am open for suggestions..thanks I hope you like it xoxo
          also, I am so looking forward to reading your story!!

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Hey sorry to disturb...would you check out my book souvenir, it would mean a lot, please vote and comment...I am open to suggestions and improvements ❤❤

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Ciao,
          What's up you guys? Hope you are all doing well.
          
          This is a little late but I updated chapter 5 of  "Don't Love me" and I think not all of you were informed so I thought why not announce it.
          Check it out whenever you have time and please let me know what you thought of it.
          All the Love.
          
          PS .  Tay is 30 today and I still can't wrap my head around the fact that we are blessed with such a legend .
          And
          
          Fine Line is everything.EVERYTHING.

Hi! I just published my first book called MELT FOR YOU, it is on my profile. It is about a “ferocious” businessman who makes an exception for an “innocent” beauty. I would be so grateful if you could give it a read and let me know what you think! I need your feedback ❤️ thank you so much! Hoping you can give it a look

Check out my novel if your free... A d say how u feel about it
          
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Oh goodness. You are only 18, with so much knowledge buried inside you? Your parents must be sooo proud