❝Clandestine❞

hello po, sorry for the disturbance. i'm a young aspiring author po. if you have some free time, i hope you can visit my profile and check  out my stories. thank you in advance!

Hi Author! 
          
          Ngayon ko lang nabasa ang chapter 1. Honestly maganda yong pagkakanarrate mo ng story may mga konting errors lang pero maayos naman. Then proper use of punctuation mark, like kung saan ginagamit ang (.) and (,). Since chapter lang ang nabasa ko hindi na ako magcocomment about sa plot but I think it's a good story. Keep up the good work po author, maganda ang story mo kumpara don sa first story na ginawa ko way back 2010. 

Hi author! I read ATW and pansin ko na there are some grammatical errors and kulang yung mga punctuation marks, so far so good naman! Keep on writing po. 
          
          If you're interested, please check out my works po, I can use some constructive criticism hehe. Thank you!

Hi author! Keep writing, pansin kong need lang ayusin yung ibang words sa ATW since may mga misspelled. Sa dialogue naman ay napansin kong mayroong mga walang period sa dulo. However, maganda naman yung deliverance ng bawat lines and scenarios mo. It's a good job, take this as a stepping stone to reach at the end of finally making it a completed novel ✨❤️ 

Keep writing, bb! I really love 'Along the Waves' It really did caught my eyes. Please write more!