Itsurmari

revising pew!

IMRNSSRY

Hi, it's me. willing makipag-exchange 40 total comments sana, need lang honest feedbacks, na magno-notice ng kakulangan ng current na sinusulat ko, para agad ako makapag-edit. Hehe 5chapters lang po itong akin. + votes of course. ^^ let's be mutual & support each other to this writing journey. ^^

IMRNSSRY

@Itsurmari Hi, I'm done checking your works. Wala akong masyado masabi, wala rin naman akong nakita na loopholes. It is all well written naman. Actually, maganda yung kwento mo, clean naman ang plot, & interesting. Will probably support it, wait ko mga updates mo. Nakalagay na rin sa reading list ko, 'cause I'm going to check it from time to time. Baka I'll be permanently send feedbacks, & votes, as long as you also do the same naman. Be updated na lang din sa mga update ko. Thank you for your support. Keep it up! Tuloy mo lang po pagsusulat, & kapag natapos mo na ang whole story, kahit promote na lang ng promote ang gawin mo. May chances naman na makahook to ng genuine readers 'cause it's clean & well written, yun naman ang mahalaga. I'm rooting for that, for you. Godbless even more. ♡⁠๑
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IMRNSSRY

@Itsurmari geh, magstart ako sa Chapter 10. ^^
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Itsurmari

@IMRNSSRY suree, do it first po. Chapter 14 and 15 lang sakin. After I'll comment back on 5 chapters sa book mo:)
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