Itz_Tanji

It's over

ImagineBreathingFr

@Itz_Tanji It could never be more over
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BeanerMan1

@Itz_Tanji HAALAND, HAALAND... I'm sorryyyy┗( T﹏T )┛
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Itz_Tanji

Okay change of plans again. The next chapter will be 28 (then I'll finish 0.2 and 0.3). It will focus on Eiichiro, Ike and other boys.
          
          It's going to be... interesting.
          
          I'm also projecting some of my own experiences in the form of lessons (Although Eiichiro isn't my self-insert lol, just an identification).
          
          I plan to post on Friday, after Brazil's victory.

Reader_BOTWfan

@Itz_Tanji my Real Madrid boys will clutch up then
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Itz_Tanji

@Reader_BOTWfan Sadly he's still injuried, but i trust my starboys Vini and Endrick!!!!
            
            If Brazil wins = New chapter.
            If it's a tie = No chapter until next match.
            If Brazil loses = I'll stop writing in my drafts for a month.
            
            Depending on the Victory, I might even write the chap in Discord sharing my screen
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Reader_BOTWfan

@Itz_Tanji trust in the goat neymar hes probably going to play his first game vs haiti
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kharoufe

Hey, author, I just came across your fanfic "Best Version of Me." And honestly, I was really looking forward to it because it had 30 chapters. I wanted to send the message here and not in the comments so fewer people see it. Unfortunately, your story is filled with AI; some people might not have a problem, but others, like me, can't read something like this because it's extremely annoying. I know you're from Brazil, and English isn't your first language. But all I wanted to say is that if your writing is AI, fewer people will enjoy the story, even if you have wonderful ideas. I'm just ranting because most stories nowadays use AI. Don't take this feedback negatively; I'm just trying to offer some criticism of what I'm seeing. Feel free to delete this thread if you prefer; I won't be offended.

Itz_Tanji

@kharoufe  Yes, I totally get what you mean, there are many recent fics that are, like, random ais and stuff. 
            
            I genuinely don't take your judgment personally, don't worry. I'll take it as an opportunity for me to improve.
            
            Also i understand your advice, but I still don't see any reason to use ai to improve my orthography. I feel like I'll only improve if I try to do it myself genuinely. Lowk that's how I managed to progress from the first chaps until now (scenario, writing, vocabulary).
            
            Again, thank you for the heads-up and for your thoughts ^^
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kharoufe

@Itz_Tanji I do write fanfics, but I don’t really post them. (I don’t really count the ones on my profile cuz that was many years ago and I was still young haha). AI can be used to fix grammar and some orthography mistakes. And if the sentences are your own, AI can’t ruin your story. I can share some with you if you have a discord
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kharoufe

@Itz_Tanji I can see you’re genuinely trying to get better. And I only criticized one of your stories cuz I didn’t try the other ones, and I wasn’t about to judge them before reading. I’ll give the other ones a try. It’s just that most stories nowadays rely on AI and they simply aren’t enjoyable reads.
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