Fatiha Sharmin

I'm not tryna be rude but make the story actually good bcos 
          1. Writing is squashed up so makes it hard to read properly
          2. Boring storyline
          3. Uninteresting
          4. Stole multiple ideas from someone 
          5. Terrible and cheap book cover, made in what?2 minutes?
          So I'm not attempting to spread hate to you or have anything against you but pls improve bcos I think you have alot of potential u just need to show it.
          
          Thanks,
          Maryamirah
          xxx