IvaBos

If you want me to read and comment your story, DM me.
          	PS. I can only read and comment stories on English language. :)

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IvaBos

@Wattpa-d_____Tip-s__ I already subscribed. :)
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BWthewriter

Hi! I love your stories! 
          
          I'm working on a few projects of my own, if you or anyone else would be interested in checking it out and maybe even leaving a follow, that would be greatly appreciated! Thank you!!

BWthewriter

@IvaBos Thank you! I really appreciate the feedback. And sure, I'll follow you back!
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IvaBos

@BWthewriter I had read your story. It's  strange that you named your character Death, but I like it. I usually don't like historical fiction, or anything historical at all, but I find that your beginning of story occupied my brain and was interesting. Just keep going!
            If I may give you advice, I think that you should be more careful with punctuation (I'm not valid to tell you that, because my English sucks, but I am Serbian language teacher, and because of that I said). Other than that, I really enjoyed your story. Let me know when you realise next chapter. :) 
            And please follow me back.
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