IzabellaFuller

Im back now. I just needed to hook up my new phone

MaerlynsTalez

Hello! So I have been enjoying your Lost Boys book immensely. I just finished chapter 10 and I have a small constructive criticism for the mention of Dwayne being around when the Native Americans “still existed”. Indigenous People are still around, they haven’t gone extinct. 
          
          My recommendation would be to probably change the wording from “still existed” to during Western Expansion. I’m not a history buff in that timeframe so I could be mislabeling it, but I do think it is a better phrase than inferring the people are no more. 
          
          I am sorry if this is rude to put into the post message section of your profile. I would have preferred off to the side conversations for respect towards you as the author, but I don’t know how to do that here. Sorry. 
          
          I hope you are having an amazing weekend! 

kh0611

Hi idk if u will see this or if u are on the app anymore but if u are can u plz upset the lost boys lost but found book

kh0611

@izabellaFuller sorry just now for some reason got your notification. Wattpad is a mess lately but can’t wait to read it
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IzabellaFuller

@kh0611 I am still on here! I'm just still working on the next chapter!
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