Hello! So I have been enjoying your Lost Boys book immensely. I just finished chapter 10 and I have a small constructive criticism for the mention of Dwayne being around when the Native Americans “still existed”. Indigenous People are still around, they haven’t gone extinct.
My recommendation would be to probably change the wording from “still existed” to during Western Expansion. I’m not a history buff in that timeframe so I could be mislabeling it, but I do think it is a better phrase than inferring the people are no more.
I am sorry if this is rude to put into the post message section of your profile. I would have preferred off to the side conversations for respect towards you as the author, but I don’t know how to do that here. Sorry.
I hope you are having an amazing weekend!