@Izakai_Lord
Yo, another weird poem of mine.
I just published "SpaceBanana" of my story "PoetryNotebook". https://www.wattpad.com/1618852805?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=Izakai_Lord
I changed my background.
Quick question, what do you guys think of my book cover? I made it from SVG code. Does it look clear? Does it have all of the elements? Eg, do you see a pen, the title, the author name, and the paper-like background?
Hey, a new poem. Can you guys check it out?
I just published "Flyingtrain" of my story "PoetryNotebook". https://www.wattpad.com/1616667823?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=Izakai_Lord
hey! i remember you. you were one for my first followers on here. i used to read nn vote on your work. what happened to all your books?? i want to return the support you’ve been showing.
Hey, I started over. Can you guys check the first poem in this? I need feedback on the clarity, conciseness, impact, and precision categories.
I just published "Where" of my story "The Aurora's Bridge". https://www.wattpad.com/1614360906?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=Izakai_Lord
Hey, another poem. Need feedback for it.
I just published "Polarbear" of my story "Poems on Ice". https://www.wattpad.com/1613264274?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=Izakai_Lord
@Izakai_Lord I see you took your works down again. I hope it had nothing to do with my question. It sounded like you were looking for specific kind of feedback. It can helpful to focus on a particular aspect of the work and I was trying to prepare my mind to view the poem through that lens. I haven't read it. Still haven't. Best of luck.
@novelistASH @novelistASH Oh, it's not you. I had another idea. The one-shot collection is too disconnected for me, so I started over. Following the outline, I have some bullet points.
Hey, one random poem.
I just published "Penguin" of my story "Poems on Ice". https://www.wattpad.com/1613263881?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=Izakai_Lord
Too late to say it perhaps but
Thanks for the follow ✨✨✨