Izakai_Lord

Hello, another story. Feedback is needed and appreciated.
          	I just published "Pond of Mirrored Worlds" of my story "My Library of Short-Stories ". https://www.wattpad.com/1590766609?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=Izakai_Lord

Izakai_Lord

Question, does this character pop into your mind? 
          
          "Yes.
          I'm finished, my lovely companions. I have brought some helpful items: Naturally, a knife for stabbing things;  multiple signal flares in case we get lost…" she pulled her white nails, scratching her bouncing, blue curls. "Ahh, yes! The shock collar, a magnificent tool of obedience. Good for chaos clowns. I never leave my home without it."