Kage_Kitsune_X

IZZY, CONTINUE THE SORY RN
          I AND WAY TO ADDICTED TO IT AND NEED MORE
          YOUR WORK IS UNDERRATED
          I KEEP RE-READING IT
          AAA
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Kage_Kitsune_X

I CANT COPY AND PASTE SO HERE”S MINE
            
            
            Kage_Kitsune#2400
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IzzyGenshin8

@Kage_Kitsune_X 
            •Żhøŋgḻî #8391 HERE YA GO MA'AM IF YA WANT YOU CAN FRIEND ME ANY TIME
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GlennaJohannaAinlo

Oh yea one thing. (I don't  know much but yea hear me out) you know where you used 'so' ' ,  ' okay I think you can just end a Sentence there. So it could me more comfortable to read. Look at this- '''I like to eat cookies alot and I like tea too, so sometimes I like to eat them together because it tastes good.''''instead you could do this- I like to eat cookies alot. I  like tea too so I sometimes eat them together.
          I hope this makes sense and helps(again I haven't written any stories myself SO I DINT KNOW MUCHHH~SO DECIDE THIS YOURELF)! WRITE STORIES HOW YOU LIKE!!LOVE YA

IzzyGenshin8

@GlennaJohannaAinlo HELP HOW DID I JUST SEE THIS
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GlennaJohannaAinlo

@GlennaJohannaAinlo YOU DON'T HAVE TO MAKE EVERY SENTENCE LIKE THIS! OKAY OKAY I'LL LEAV EYOU ALONE NOW BYE BYE
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