Oh yea one thing. (I don't know much but yea hear me out) you know where you used 'so' ' , ' okay I think you can just end a Sentence there. So it could me more comfortable to read. Look at this- '''I like to eat cookies alot and I like tea too, so sometimes I like to eat them together because it tastes good.''''instead you could do this- I like to eat cookies alot. I like tea too so I sometimes eat them together.
I hope this makes sense and helps(again I haven't written any stories myself SO I DINT KNOW MUCHHH~SO DECIDE THIS YOURELF)! WRITE STORIES HOW YOU LIKE!!LOVE YA