Alright you guys, my first work... well it needs a lot of work. I've read it over and looked at it hard and realized that my transition needs work, my character progression definitely needs work, and well... I need to make it a little more inviting or interesting to my readers. So, with that said, today I'm deleting it, and starting over. I won't publish until I have decided that the first chapter is good and looks good. Sorry for any inconvenience I may have caused (though insidiously doubt I did).
