TonyCardini

Izzy,
          
          Mind checking out my Y.A. Novel The Trek of The Chosen.  Would love to get your take on it.  I’m thinking about removing Chapter One entirely.  Your thoughts?
          
          -Tony Cardini

TonyCardini

Thanks, it was suppose to be character building, but . . . It seems out of place with the rest of the story.
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Izzy_g123

@TonyCardini  I think you should. There’s no point in it. Tootles
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