I have been swamped with work this week, but I also toyed around with the idea of changing the story from third person to many first person POV's.
I tried it out with the prologue; if you have time, please let me know what you think! I am hoping it will help readers identify with the main characters.
I will also revise to connect the story line together more thoroughly. Thanks for your patience!
@KCCThomas No problem :) I just started reading it, but I have really enjoyed it. Very interesting and original.
Thank you for continuing to vote on my chapters as well. I have found your support very encouraging.
@krazydiamond Aww. Thank you! I have a lot of time to make up tales sitting on my favorite windowsill all day.
That means a lot coming from you :) I also adore your sharply executed writing.
Yes, I did the sketches as fun exercises. These are old characters of mine and I have been drawing them for about 12 years.
@Izzy_the_cat You write extremely well for a cat.
No need to be embarrassed, wattpad is full of flubs.
Did you do the artwork to the chapters yourself?