JACKPOT2

@kiyorisu_ayanon  To be honest, with you, I really like how your side of the Koji being in class A is going. it is not only focused on Arisu and Koji like in many of the Class A fanfics and Koji does engage with other students as well, which is a plus in my book. As for advice, I dont really have anything in particular, only thing I can really recommend is what I do lol and that is just come up with as small setting on where u want to take the next chapter, and expand on it, Thats what I do and it seems to be working well so I suppose that is the only one I can give. as for how u are writing, personally I like your style and way you write, Its smooth and not boring at all, you don't dwell on making too much details (which u should avoid, it gets incredibly tiring to read + sounds like an AI wrote too) and use simple words too, so in short, yes you are writing it correctly and its incredibly enjoyable to read. anyways, good luck on your next chapter, can't wait for it to release!

@JACKPOT2 thanks nd good luck for you as well 

@JACKPOT2 
            1. Thank you. The changes are fine.
            2/3. Nice. I mentioned fuka cause she is of a high family. From what ik the high fams r ayanokoji, koenji, sakayanagi, kiryuin, kanzaki, and matsushita.
            4. Nice one.
            Thank you for responding

@Nebulark456 
            
            well first thank you for the ideas you brought me, I will address them properly
            
            1. I like this idea of them going on a date, but I might have to cut the almost a kiss scene out, since I think it will ruin the direction I want to take this fanfic, and (this might count as a spoiler but...) I already have everything planned out on how I want the confession to go.
            
            2 and 3rd: I absolutely love those 2, even though Kanzaki was planned to be joining the group, Fuka also can join, so I will yoink that too. though a teaser, someone very unexpected will be joining their party too. also I might combine those 2 ideas with the first idea in the chapter 14, but instead of on the ship I will do it on campus, will that be alright? cuz I dont wanna stay on the ship too long lol.
            
            4th: I like this idea for a special chapter, so I will implement that in a near future if that is alright with you.
            
            thank you for all these amazing

@JACKPOT2  i got 3 ideas
            1. Kiyo and arisu go on a date around the ship. Ayanokoi group and arisu loyal 3 tail them. Near the end, kiyo and arisu go around the back of the ship and hug and maybe even almost kiss but sense the presense of the tailer before contact
            2. Kiyo and arisu make contact with kanzaki and maybe even kiryuin to join their group.
            3. The current members of the kiyo political group have a party to celebrate the end of the exam + koenji's win.
            For the date, a scene where kiyo and arisu see ryuen in a casino and join with him to scam the casino would be funny.
            Thank you author