JCNord

Wow. That turned into something I wasn't expecting.
          	I just published "Chapter 7: A Shift in Reality" of my story "The Crimson Prince: The Seven Pillars". https://my.w.tt/NgU5NIKvGL

JCNord

@SpikeNy I actually moved back home to Minnesota a year ago.
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JCNord

I am having a great time portraying the King's relationship with Maya in the third book. Their experiences are similar in some ways.
          
          I want to know what everyone thinks of chapter 6. Was it too mixed up? Was it too emotional? How did you guys feel towards the end of it?

JCNord

I was thinking of making A Wizard's Birth: Awakening more in depth. For those who are still reading, put on spoiler glasses, this is about to get messy.
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          For those who have read enough, you know a little about Jake. The problem is, for those of you who have read all of my work, you know a little about Jake.
          I was thinking of adding a few chapters giving a little more substance to Jake. I liked the fight scene Will had with the thugs, but I could have done more.
          The Royal Flame Crusade is getting more active recently on the series, yet there hasn't been a need for them besides stopping robberies and small time criminal activity. What if all crime from New York stems from the corruption aura? What if a corruption user was the one who took Jake from his guardian because he sensed the dark aura around him?
          What if Will took down a boss within the corruption and inspired Jake to form the New York Crusade?
          
          What if Will and Maya spent more time in Ebonhart together and actually trade goods at NearWood Village and got to know Roy before Kings Blood?
          
          What if instead of Michael just appearing to take Bianca and Will to New York, Will tries to scry him using his aura, but instead gets latitude and longitude to the mansion?
          
          What if Leo gets his own chapter on his travels from Minnesota to New York?

JCNord

Thank you all for taking such interest in my books! If you see anything that may need to be fixed, let me know through private message and I'll get right on it.
          
          If you enjoy my writing, I would love to hear your feedback and if you don't, I wouldn't mind hearing from you as well. If you wish to see your name as a part of the Flame Crusade, I would love to have you join Will in his journeys.  All I need to know is what your talent is, whether you are a mechanic, a veteran, or if you are just a good hunter. 
          
          I hope to hear from you all soon!

avadel

Wow! Thank you so much for all the votes! Can I ask how you found us?

avadel

@KianajLau Awesome! We look forward to seeing you there. Feel free to PM us or @MysteriousMarvels if you have any questions about the rules. (=
            
            And thanks! I hope you enjoy what you read. (=
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OliviajLee

@JeffNord ‘s books are amazing and @avadel , yours seem really interesting as well.  I may join your competition on your other profile sometime soon.
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avadel

@JeffNord Thanks for the compliments! We'll make sure to go back and look at the conversations when we do our edit. Was there any one conversation that stuck out in particular to you as being off?
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