JGangway

Greeting! I will update "The Silver Dagger" weekly every Friday. Let me know if I should update more than once a week.  :)

crystalathena

So I read the first chapter 3 times and I really like it! There's a few places that need fixing or editing so I'll comment on the paragraphs and let you know what would help in that area, and I will do the same with the rest of the chapters that way it's easier for you to know which parts to edit, sound good? 

crystalathena

If you would like i can proofread your story :)

JGangway

@crystalathena i think its too much to ask if both books.. I'm already okay you proofreading my first book (The Silver Dagger)
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crystalathena

Do you want me to proof read your first book or both? I can proof read both if you'd like
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JGangway

@crystalathena well I'm happy to know that. I'm looking forward on it.
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JGangway

Greeting! It's been a long time since I updated "The Silver Dagger" because hectic schedules at work but hopefully you'll still continue reading and supporting my story.
          
          Checked the next chapter of The Silver Dagger-Chapter 25.