JHGaines

@JHGaines Thanks Joseph. Book covers reveal things that your profile don't. :) 
          
          They are indeed very attractive, well I am yet to reach that stage of expertise. So you design them on your own?
          
          Well great meeting you too.
          
          Have a good time writing. - Eureka

@EurekaEureka Hi Eureka, what a wonderful name!
          I am pleased you like the covers, maybe we can swap ideas sometime?
          Nice to meet you
          JH

@JHGaines I love all of your book covers. Well i keep experimenting on them, so yes that would be the first thing that pulls me in to the story. So thank you for introducing me to your work. interesting story lines.

Thanks for following me!

@TristiPinkston 
          Nice to meet you also Tristi,
          sorry for the late reply, but i have had my head buried in a new manuscript!

Zachania (The Mind of a Warrior) The Diaries & Poetry of Lord Talon, Is free to download for 48 hours.
          Grab you copy by following the link below and discover what really goes on behind the eyes of the warrior.
          Currently #5 in Amazon's Epic Poetry category
          http://jhgaines.blogspot.co.uk/

@TristiPinkston And you Tristi , have a nice day. JH

Good to meet you!

I got your new blurb before the admins put the kybosh on the thread. I think it is still too much. It is better, but you need to narrow down to what is the single most important hook for your story.  Something like. "For six thousand years the land of Kratos bled war, until Zachania came. He was no hero, he was something very different."
          
          I imagine someone reading your introduction in a cheezy voice over, which won't get people reading your book. The blurb isn't the place to extol your MC's wonderful traits. It is to capture the imagination so people will want to read your book.

If you read my article on blurb writing then message me your blurb. I will read your story and critique the story and blurb.