J J Gibbard

After a recurring dream many years ago, I decided to put it down on “paper”. 
          I have been so discouraged about the lack of reads, until I received one review. 
          It has pushed me to reevaluate my sequel novel, and I’m so incredibly thankful for their comments. 

After a few months away, I’ve been back to make adjustments to a few grammatical mistakes. I hope the improvements are to everyone’s liking. 
          Thank you to everyone that has taken the time to read my little tale. If you enjoyed the story, please spread the word.  If you spot something that needs my attention, let me know too. I’m always looking to improve. 

Hey, I’ve just finished reading block 8, cell 18 and let me just start by saying I don’t know why it hasn’t got a lot more views or recognition. I know you handle a load of heavy situations in this but you don’t do it so often that it becomes sickening but just enough that we know the events and garner an idea. I want this to be encouragement for you to continue on writing as your writing is some of the best I’ve read from a first time book and let me say I’ve read *TONNES*. Please keep up the work. Xxx

Changing my POV. 
          Any chapters with sub headings is completed. 
          Thanks for your cooperation x
          

First of all, I’d like to thank those who took the time to read this. 
          This is my first attempt at writing, so I know it won’t be a best seller. 
          As a newbie, I’d appreciate feedback as to how to improve my story. 
          Loves to you all! X