Jaeli

OKAY LISTEN UP. i’m done. literally done. i get all hyped, all motivated, start writing like my life depends on it… and then. Two months later i hate every single word i’ve ever written. it’s like self-sabotage is my only consistent hobby.
          
          i look at my stories and honestly? trash. hot garbage. i could’ve done better but i didn’t, and now every time i scroll through them i physically cringe. like who let me post this? why did i think this was good?
          
          and don’t even get me started on school. school has me in a chokehold, suffocating me while laughing in my face. i have zero time, zero energy, zero brain cells left.
          
          so yeah. this is my goodbye. i don’t know if it’s forever, or until i randomly get possessed by motivation at 3am and crawl back. but right now? i hate everything i’ve written, i wanna delete it all, and i just… can’t do this anymore.
          
          thanks if you actually stuck around through my chaos, but i’m tapping out. goodbye, goodnight, and good luck surviving you're life...
          
          -Jaeli

It’s me Hey—
          
          I want to see is you can clarify some things I noticed in the story.
          
          I can’t remember where, but at some point
           it felt like I was rereading part of the story you had already written. I know that it switches POVs and between past and present but was this perhaps an error? Or was my late night reading causing me confusion? I could swear that I reread almost the same thing, but slightly different. 
          
          Also, she kept talking about the key when planning to escape. I didn’t catch what the key was for? A drawer in his office? If so, what the heck was in the drawer? Was it a key to a gate or a door? And then at the end she mentions the kew before… (fill in the blank). If the key on the necklace related to the ending key? 
          
          And lastly, the phone was a trap? How so? It wasn’t clear to me. Maybe I’m just fkg stupid, idk, but the way you wrote this particular bit confused me. 
          
          Fingers crossed that book 2 explores the ex and Min, more detail on the accident, as well as how she could forget the face of a god. 
          
          Anyway. You’re brain is so wonderful for concocting such a diabolical story! 
          
          

I know you said no smut but…
          
          Dang— some smut would have paired so well with this.