K-ManGriffin
Well, I have left a whole bunch of new comments regarding your Vampire's Redemption story all in the Curtin call segment of Fruits of corruption. Just thought of doing stuff regarding Shift to start with. I look forward to refining things as we go along.
K-ManGriffin
Oh and I have an idea for HHAVR during the curtin call segment. If and when the vampire present want to demand justice for Shifts actions as the investor despite helping to stop Vox, Liam, Vaggi, and Charlie could stand in the way. Ultimately when the vampire novels try to take the law into their hands, Charlie goes full demean form and uses their oaths to her family to Camano them to stand down. Then like with Abel confronting lute, a imagery projection of Lilith manifests behind Charlie. This gets them to back down. Some even admit that preaches there is more of her mom in her than we thought. Then they back down out of respect for the daughter of their creator.
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K-ManGriffin
understood. I will wait. In the meantime, I will have some more refinements on Shift's face done by the end of the weekend at latest.
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JLArmstone1092
@K-ManGriffin I noticed. I'm just also finding myself on a bit of a Game of Thrones high right now.
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