JMAN887

Chapter 21 is way longer than what I have intended to be, and when I'm done, I will try and see what I am gonna take out and leave in. But if you all want me to leave it as it is when it is done, I will do so, but it is really long, and I am not sure if I have to split it into parts, but will see once it finished

JMAN887

Chapter 21 is way longer than what I have intended to be, and when I'm done, I will try and see what I am gonna take out and leave in. But if you all want me to leave it as it is when it is done, I will do so, but it is really long, and I am not sure if I have to split it into parts, but will see once it finished

JMAN887

Hey, guys I almost lost my hole Chapter 13 that I've been working on for a while, but luckly enough I manged to get everything back so don't worry, Chapter 13 of A Spider That Once Was A Rose has not been delayed...thank goodness.

angelr4930

Thank you for following me and what did you like about my book.

angelr4930

@JMAN887 Thanks for the feed back.
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JMAN887

@angelr4930 Probably the Yandere part. I think you did good on what I though about what a yandere will do to the main character to try and forced him to love her and seeing the main character refusing and also be afraid of her, but later on slowly began to fall for her while also be a little afraid her. I do like your female Yandere Adam story. Sure there where some bumps, but I'm curious on your the remake.
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