@StylesWannaBx @StylesWannaBx @StylesWannaBx Hi! I have read your comment, i really appreciate your concerns and suggestions. Thank you for reading my story. and As I've wrote on my "about" that I am only using my phone to update my story. I didn't that say that it'll be perfect. I am not a professional writer, I am just sharing the stories on my head using Wattpad and to share this to other people. And as for the dedication, I've only dedicate a capter of my story once not more than once. Please try to read it all. Thank you and God bless.