JMRavyn

@StylesWannaBx @StylesWannaBx @StylesWannaBx Hi! I have read your comment, i really appreciate your concerns and suggestions. Thank you for reading my story. and As I've wrote on my "about" that I am only using my phone to update my story. I didn't that say that it'll be perfect. I am not a professional writer, I am just sharing the stories on my head using Wattpad and to share this to other people. And as for the dedication, I've only dedicate a capter of my story once not more than once. Please try to read it all. Thank you and God bless.

irwinrhino

@Miss-You-Know-Who Thank you for considering my suggestions.
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JMRavyn

@StylesWannaBx @StylesWannaBx @StylesWannaBx Hi! I have read your comment, i really appreciate your concerns and suggestions. Thank you for reading my story. and As I've wrote on my "about" that I am only using my phone to update my story. I didn't that say that it'll be perfect. I am not a professional writer, I am just sharing the stories on my head using Wattpad and to share this to other people. And as for the dedication, I've only dedicate a capter of my story once not more than once. Please try to read it all. Thank you and God bless.

irwinrhino

@Miss-You-Know-Who Thank you for considering my suggestions.
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irwinrhino

I like your story: Im just your sex slave. Its pretty nice. But there's this thing with the cover. There's always a space for renovation. And! I've seen na there are some words in your story which are spelled the wrong way. So I hope some changes for the better. I have some suggestion na din. Wag po kayo bigay ng bigay ng dedications kasi marami akong nakitang nagtatanong sayo. Why don't you give it dun sa nagbabasa talaga and yung isa sa nakatulong sa pagbuo ng story mo. Yun lang siguro. Ciao!