@kcgalloway you wrote such a fantastic story. Full of emotions, well rounded but flawed characters, and a world that was both fantastical and recognizable. You took me on an emotional journey that did not lack adventure or intrigue. You ended the story on a positive note and I can't wait to see if you continue with book two or if you open up a new world. I may not comment a lot but I truly did enjoy your work! You are an excellent writer! Be proud of this story and skills you displayed.