Hi there,
The story of "My Endless Blue" is such a magnificent story. All the words you've used are perfectly for to each part of each chapter, especially for the messages. It is very poetic and full of warm and thoughtful words that struck deep, not only to the heart but also to a person soul, as it make people to ponder about the message of the text and the message of the story. Though, it might seem far from reality, it reflects various relationship-both Homosexual and Heterosexual relationship. Words are chosen carefully to fit the purpose of the message, so as the thoughts that it brings to the readers. Therefore, this is a great piece of Literature. Keep up the good work, and do not pressure yourself to update the story.
Write and imagine at your own pace as people who truly appreciate your work will wait patiently as they can understand that it takes a lot of time to create such masterpiece.
