Riva1238

Heyyy !!!! I have read your story overall it was good but I felt there were very too low scenes for main lead together Spclly after they were reconciled I felt there was a need both to learn things about each other and make more time together also the family bond Spclly the sibilngs one could be more deep and have a great bond together. I hope in nxt story of yours u would make the chnges 

JShree1309

@Riva1238 Thanks for your comments 
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JShree1309

@Riva1238 sure.. Will take a note of it.. 
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