@JTAngeles
@AifaRusydinaRoslan Thank you. I wrote a story, but it's actually from my very own experience later this evening. I will begin with a new story after a few days of rest. Thank you. You have also given me the strength I need to finish my works.
What? You mean that One Miracle is the one and only story you ever published? Please write some more. Your writing inspired me to rewrite my long lost story all over again. Please write more stories...
your story its reallly very nice .
it made me cry . and please write more stories
Thank you very much for reading my story. Today is my first week here on Wattpad and I do hope we'll all be friends. Please do read the upcoming story I'll upload. The genre would be Romance/Drama/Tragedy/Spiritual.
Godspeed!
@JustTheRipper im glad :)
@Softball4life Thank you very much for that :) I'll sure edit it when I have the time :) I'll take that advice as I write my new story. Thank you very much. You've been helpful :)
****also, about halfway through, you refer to her as MAY not as MHAE
i said i would edit your story "One Miracle" and i looked at it. I dont know exactly how to edit it so i figured i would just send you a message. To begin with i really enjoyed this story, alot. But i think that in the very begginging, you need to explain more into how he feels, why he feels the way he does, that no one likes him. Give an example or something. Also, later on, when Jade doesnt answer Mhae, you shouldnt put the dots there. You should go in and explain how Jade felt during the silence, if it was a preacful one or one that was more awkward. But i really love Mhae's idea with the rain and how happy it makes the flowers:) i hope this helped and i really uunderstand if you dont listen to me, i am really only 14 so.... Hope this helps :)
@VanillaxEssy15 Wow... um. thank you so much I'm overwhelmed >.< I hope I'll be able to satisfy you with the next story I'll upload. Good day :)
Hi!!!!!!!!!! I love your story so much, it had me on the verge of tears. Thank you so much for that story, it helped me a lot. it was just what I needed this time! Thank you for thinking of a story as awesome as this!!!!