Joseph Tomaso

more tragic news 
          
          guy moon who wrote music for film and animated television series such as 2 Stupid Dogs, Johnny Bravo, Cow and Chicken, The Grim Adventures of Billy & Mandy The Fairly OddParents Danny Phantom, Tak and the Power of Juju Big Time Rush, T.U.F.F. Puppy, and Back at the Barnyard 
          
          died on January 8th

just posting this here in case it doesn't go on archiveofourown for whatever reason
          
          I have suggestions for “No time to spy” 
          
          after Fifi appears for the first time the louds, plus Albert and Myrtle glare at her and growl
          Hector “uhhh guys what wrong? why are you glaring at this lady?”
          Rosa “did she do something bad”
          Lori “that’s an understatement!”
          Albert “ she did something so bad, so horrific so….EVIL! that I can’t even put it into words”
          Sid “Jeez! what did she do?”
          the loud pause…
          Rita “spoilers! so we can’t tell you but trust us you WILL understand why we hate this women”
          
          when Lincoln reunites with his family after Myrtle get captured 
          Stella “ no offence guys but isn’t this the part were you all blame Lincoln even through the situation was out of his control?”
          Luan “relax stella that didn’t happen this time”
          Luna “we ALL KNEW that Lincoln wasn’t at fault this time”
          Lana “and even if he was we also knew he felt guilty enough about it”
          Lucy “so we felt no need to try to make him feel worse”
          the rest of the cast happily smiles at hearing this
          
          after Lisa says that one of them will need to stay behind the louds and Myrtle apart from Lincoln begin to look nervous and breathe heavily 
          
          Ronnie Ann “ hey are you guys ok?”
          Lori “sorry Ronnie Ann but…we…”
          Lola “are about to witness something that we have been dreading and NEVER wanted to relive”
          Leni stands up “ I CAN’T DO THIS can we PLEASE skip this part!” 
          Lucy “yes this is too dark even for me”
          Lynn “yeah I’m with them on this one!” 
          Lisa “ I concur sisters.”
          Luna “that sounds good to me as well
          Lana “ and me makes 6”
          Lilly “Lilly wants to skip this part too”
          Rita and Lynn just nod in agreement with their children but 
          Lincoln stands up and says “guys, you ALL know its ended up ok…I’m right here!”
          Ronnie Ann with a sense of dread “what…what do you mean by that?! Lincoln! what’s going to happen?!”
          Leni look at her with a heartbreaking expression “ one of the worst most painful moments I have ever felt.”

About Treasure Haunt:
          
          1) - How everyone would react when they see Lincoln trying archery? 
          
          2) - How everyone would say when they see Lincoln ignoring Lucy's warning about the flag? 
          
          3) - How everyone would react when they see the zombie captain Kit and his partner, Oto the octopus?
          
          4) - Will Margo threat Lynn for falling her brother "Stinkoln" again, until Lincoln yells at Margo to stop and say she had the right to being called for that stupid nickname because he deserved it?
          
          5) - How everyone (mostly CJ and Ronnie Anne) would react when they see Lincoln fighting against captain Kit?
          
          6) After the episode, there's four things:
          
          - How everyone (aside from Lincoln, Clyde, Leonard, Lynn, Lucy and Lola) would react after watching the the final scene of this episode?
          
          - Did Lincoln has a punishment after this? And please, don't make Lincoln have a punishment, he didn't know that.
          
          - Did the other Louds and Darcy know what happened?
          
          - Will someone explain to Lincoln why did he do that three times in each arc? Especially someone has to remind Lincoln the dragons, ghosts, aliens (thanks to the other episode), zombies, gods are real.

the-walking-bed 
          
          this feels like an episode from the earlier seasons (and I mean that in a good way
          Lori giving Leni her old mattress is actually fair to me, she IS the next oldest and Lincoln didn’t ask her for it l liked Lincoln offering to do things for Leni, Luna and Luan to get the mattress and that NONE of them were unreasonable, heck even LYNN had a good reason her mattress may not be as bad as Lincoln but its still bad. I liked Lincoln discovering the amendment. I liked the Luan supporting Lincoln getting the mattress to Lynn, Lynn being touched by this and Lincoln giving up the mattress and saying that the well being of the family comes first. Finally liked Lynn giving Lincoln her old mattress and putting stuffing in there to solve the problem, (why didn’t he just take Lynn mattress from the start? I know its saggy but that sounds better then what Lincoln had. 
          
          I thought for a moment that the sisters were arguing about stuff to teach Lincoln a lesson and was glad that I was wrong
          
          as soon as Lincoln said he had to distract Lynn was I was like “oh no don’t be an idiot” look I GET wanted a better mattress but Lincoln wasn’t  altruistic here. He TRCIKED Lynn into losing the mattress, yes he had a “good” reason  but that doesn’t mean I supported that he did. The rest of the family getting into augments was annoying but not bad. 
          
          however let me be clear that neither one of these ruins or even hurts the episode much. 
          
          overall this one is, like many so far, good 8/10

kanga-ruse 
          
          I liked chief pat saying that someone ate all of her ice cream before correcting herself to say the school, Clyde asking the viewers not the change the channel then saying they were the ONLY channel, stella telling Zach not to go to aliens as he always does (I LOVE that made her snarky) I liked Lisa helping out by conforming the poo came from a roo (solid rhyme) I liked Crickey miming what he wanted and the gang helping to prove that he was innocent. The gang chasing down the fake kangaroo, Rusty think he was going rouge and trying to rip the costume head off (how did THAT line get by the censors?) I liked rusty being recorded mr Budden’s confession
          
          I did correctly predict who the real culprit was, didn’t know why  mr  Budden did it but knew it was him.
           
          I think that Liam kind of jumped the gun when he told the gang not to suspect that Crickey  vandalized the school, there was just nothing the indicated the gang felt that the  kangaroo was the one behind it, if Lincoln or one of the others had suspected the Crickey it would’ve been fine.
          
          so this one was good, not as good as other mystery based one like "Sleepless in Royal Woods" or "An Inspector Falls" but still decent 7/10

not going to lie I had some reservations about this one, we all know that Lynn  get competitive she can be….shall we say difficult. She get so focused on winning that nothing else matter to her which makes her unlikable. lucky this was a LOT better than I thoguht/feared it would be
          
          glad that Shiloh made his reappearance and the loud kids being excited to hang out with him. loved Lola telling Shiloh that Lynn’s ego is big enough already and Lisa response to HER saying that, Shiloh upstaging Lynn in skateboarding, using the jetpack and the cannon (not going to question where that came from). Liked the challenges that Lynn and Shiloh did and Lincoln being the referee, Lynn didn’t go that far, she didn’t rig the challenges or anything. Liked Lynn realizing that she was wrong and her plan to get Shiloh to feel better
          
          Lynn definitely need to adjust her attitude, like the old adage says, “no matter how could you are there will always be someone better then you” Her being upset at being beaten by a 6 year old isn’t a good look for her.  I will admit however that her siblings constantly saying that Shiloh was the GLOAT didn’t help matters, it doesn’t excuse her attitude of course but it does make  it a little more understandable. 
          
          its fine, not the best but not bad either. 7/10

rough patch
          
           I had a feeling for how this one was going to play out, Lola was going to be tired of hanging out with Berine but then discovers something cool about him and get more into it and she no longer cares about the patch she just wants to hang out with him. it turned out it wasn’t much like that at all.
          
          Glad to see Lola and Lana be in another scouting group and snickerdoodle is a good name for it. liked scoots crashing her scooter and wondering why bad things happen to good people. Liked Lola parking her cart in the middle of mall’s electronic door, Lola missing out on the taria sell due to Bernie being a slow walker, Lola shoulder angel telling her to tough it out, Berine not being interesting in what Lola wanted to do, Lola trying to bear with it. I liked Lola dragging herself to the movie theater she left Bernie in and her resolving to earn the sash the right way. glad that there was Lola wasn’t reprimanded or punished don’t think it was necessary. 
          
          While I can’t approve of Lola abandoning Bernie I guess I’m not too mad at her either, first of all she’s a little kid it makes sense she would want to do thing she likes, secondly she’s supposed to learn a lesson. wish that Lola shoulder devil showed up, it’s a classic carton trope for a reason! I know Lola served that role well enough but still. 
          
          so this one is good, don’t know if its among the best for Lola but still good. 7/10

scene-steeler
           I liked Lincoln and Clyde struggling to create good villain for their movie, I liked Lola thinking that she was going to get the part, Luan doing it even though she’s not getting paid much, liked Lincoln saying Clyde can’t hear with all the honey in his ears and Clyde repeating it, them trying to get Lucy, Leni and Mr Grouse to be the villain, mr sprinkles SOMEHOW hold Clyde to a standstill on getting Lola to be the villain and Luan agreeing to be the villain again.
          
          I can’t get too mad at Luan, she LITERALLY said she was going to do a deep dive, that means she put everything into playing her role. that’s the ENTIRE POINT! its not like this is the first she has been overzealous in doing something, remember the first three April fool episodes?  going overboard is kind of her thing. now granted I do think she could’ve  acknowledged that. Her actions did cause discomfort for Lincoln and clyde and I am not ok with that.
          
           I think what should’ve happened (what I thought was going to happen) is that after Luan told the boys about the robots she and them would’ve  fought and defeated them. Then its revealed that Luan had recorded the whole thing, and THAT would be the movie. Luan would told them and she overheard them having trouble with the movie and wanted to help. It also would’ve been her way of apologizing by taking things too far.
          
          its fine, but one of the weaker ones so far the others has some emotional weight to them even if they were small ones, this one just mostly just jokes which isn’t bad but not as memorable to me. 5/10

prom-com
          
          I thought it seemed a little strange that the high school would put students in charge of organizing prom. If it was some random dance I wouldn’t mind but pom is a pretty big deal for many seniors so I would think that the high schools would pet adults in charge of it for various reasons. but then I remembered that prom committees are a thing and even if they weren’t I don’t know how it works, I skipped my own prom for crying out loud (no pun intended)
          
          I liked the joke with the guy picking up his prom suit when he was FIVE! Principal rivers ,miss Bernardo Lori and Rita all  unintentionally adding to her stress by building up how important prom is. I felt for Leni as her stress was going through the roof. she want this to be a success as everyone keep reminded her how “important” (that’s in quotes for a reason) is. the comical series of misfortunes that almost ruined prom, (esssacpaily the boy band just noopeing out of there) and River little speech to Leni at the end, and her saying that it’s the memories that make prom special not anything else.
          
           while food was given a good reason for Leni not liking it (parker eating some of it,) I felt that the decoration, entertainment and costumes could been better as we weren’t given a reason why she disliked what was being planned, I know the show said she wanted things to be better but so that those attending it will remember it for the rest of their lives.
          
          while I get Lori and Rita happily reminiscing about prom it seems strange to me that Rita would want to relive prom, I don’t know something about that seems sad to me. I get it’s a joke but if prom is the best thing from her youth then her youth seemed to be sadder then i thoguht it would be

'Cuff Break' 
          some might feel the girls aren’t being supportive and while I do understand their points…they ARE allowed to feel that way they do, just like how Lincoln doesn’t have to have interests in their activities they don’t have to have interests in his. Maybe they could’ve been nicer about it but I’m not going to rag them for it especially cause this isn’t the first time something like this has happened. I also can’t get too mad at Mr Grouse the guys goes trough a LOT in this episode. the same goes for him enjoying his new found fame, he misses the old days and he DID help out Lincoln.
          
          I liked Lola’s asked Lincoln if he “had to be so much so early” I’ve been in that position where I just want mind my own business and someone else keeps bringing up something I don’t care about and trust me one day you WILLL experience that as well.
          
          I liked the gang Stella, Zach  Mr. Bolhofner that this isn’t the first time that Lincoln’s magic tricks have awry, the various misfortunes that happen to  Mr Grouse, Rusty’s joke of him being old, him impressing the gang by getting the snack out of the vending machine, his old gang looking Lincoln’s friend group and the song that was faintly played, Finally the Amazing Brailster not being allowed to fly due to having sixteen doves
          
          not too many negatives 
          
          Mr Grouse was exploiting the situation but as stated before I get why did that 
          
          the girls could’ve been a little nicer but can’t blame them either.
          
          so yeah this one is pretty good. 8/10