JUDITH10_

A new update of his freaky obsession will be coming in early next week. 

AnnakayRayner

@Judith10_ Postive criticism; Chapter 49 needs some adjustments 
          It's repeated in a different...a few chapters back the character sated she caught the name yet stills in this chapter stated she didn't. She knew about the boyfriend, yet stills....the point is this chapter needs slight adjustments it's repeating another chapter.

JUDITH10_

Also, you can drop a comment on the chapter or an in-line comment about what you think. If corrections need to be made, I will sure make them. 
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JUDITH10_

Oh, I will go through it and work on that. Thank you so much for your comments. 
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AnnakayRayner

@Judith10_ On 'His freaky obsession ' my favorite chapter are   '40 and 43' the emotions were raw and I could feel it all. His anger entered my veins like juice from a vine. It's dark and real, it reasons within me. Thanks for your patience because you've mentioned this book to me two or more weeks ago.

JUDITH10_

Glad you were able to feel the emotions of the character. 
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JUDITH10_

Thank you so much. I really appreciate your comments and votes. 
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